Phrases and Using Repetition Effectively

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Hope you’ve had a good weekend. Strange weather so far – storm force winds, rain, blazing sunshine, and hail. That was just on Monday! Hope things are better with you.
Am busy prepping a story for submission to a competition and hope to get that out later this week. Almost there on it but I want a final read through on it, after a gap of course, to make sure I’ve missed nothing. Will be discussing History – Fact and Fiction for Chandler’s Ford Today later this week. Looking forward to sharing that.

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Better day weather wise today. Much appreciated by Lady, her Rhodesian Ridgeback chum, and their owners!

Already looking forward to being at The Writers’ Summer School, Swanwick in August. I’ll be running a two part course there (on editing) and taking part in some volunteer run items too.

I sometimes use known phrases in a story rather than as the title. One of these tales is The Power of Suggestion (Tripping The Flash Fantastic). Now I know that’s a well known phrase in itself but it wasn’t the main one I was writing to for this story.

Instead the phrase I use within this tale is there’s a sucker born every minute and I was “hanging” my story around that thought. I go on to repeat that phrase towards the end of the story for deliberate emphasis.

I know. You’d think within a limited word count format, the last thing you’d want to do is repeat phrases. Sometimes though it can be so effective and pack a punch to do so and that was the idea for repeating the phrase in this tale.

So if you are thinking about repeating a phrase within a story, especially in the short forms, give due thought as to why you are doing it.

Also sometimes a direct repeat would be less effective in producing an impact on a reader than if you used a paraphrase.

So think about what would have the biggest impact on your reader here. What would make them react the most? I use that as my judgment call here.

436429751_870673985072464_3161695335123637717_nIt has been a strange Monday. Blazing sunshine, heavy rain, storm force winds, and an almighty hail shower all by 3 pm today. Lady and I were glad to be indoors though earlier this morning she was delighted to see her Hungarian Vizler pal. Must admit I was hoping to be ditching my boots by now for more seasonal wear. Alas, that isn’t going to happen for a while. Am so glad writing is something I can do in the warm!

Writing Tip: Back up your work to more than one place. It’s incredibly easy to forget to do it. I once lost an evening’s work thanks to a power cut which went on for ages. I managed to recall a lot of what I’d written but I was so cross with myself over this.

Now I back up to my laptop, my memory stick, a separate external hard disk, and to Dropbox. I’m probably over compensating here (!) but I’m not being caught out again on this one.

Back up your work in more than one wayDon’t forget my author newsletter comes out on the first of each month. If you’d like to sign up for news, tips, story links and more, please head over to my landing page at https://allisonsymescollectedworks.com

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I usually put up a new video on here on Mondays. Well, I think it can be a great way to start the working week! Will be writing this week’s story shortly after I’ve written this post. Sunday afternoons is one of my top times for getting more flash fiction written.

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Hope your weekend is going well so far. Great to see the sun out (again! Am making the most of it too!).

Will be sharing History – Fact and Fiction for Chandler’s Ford Today next week. This topic came about as I’ve recently presented a PowerPoint on how two authors (Josephine Tey and Philippa Langley) have used fiction and non-fiction respectively to show Richard III in a different light than the usual Shakespearian version. My post will look at the joys of historical fiction and non-fiction and I will also be sharing a few of my other favourite reads. Post up on Friday.

I’ve written some historical flash pieces too which has also inspired my CFT post but the great thing with flash is, because it is character led, you can have great fun with genres here. I’ve written crime flash, ghost flash, fantasy flash, historical flash, slice of life flash and much else besides. Only limitation is that upper word count of 1000 words. But you can do a lot with 1000 words.

Flash encourages you to focus on what you really need to show a reader. That’s a good thing. No room for purple prose here so flash also helps you with editing as you learn to look for what is relevant and must stay and what isn’t.

Less is More is the theme for flash fiction writers

Facebook – From Light to Dark and Back Again

One of my reviews for From Light to Dark and Back Again contains the sentence ‘My favourite line in the collection – the perfect crime is the one ‘where nobody realises a crime took place’!’

Many thanks to the reviewer here. All reviews appreciated!

That story is Punish The Innocent and I loved the idea of taking the usual idea of punishing the guilty and turning things around here. Flash is a fantastic form for twist endings/humorous endings/both! I love writing this kind of story and it works out the range goes from funny to dark, depending on the nature of the twist.

I do play fair with readers though. There are always clues in the story so if you go back through it you will find how the twist fits in. This is where my outlining comes into its own because it makes sure I do place the clues in the right place to feed the twist properly. Outlines don’t have to be chapter and verse. Often for my flash pieces, it’s just a paragraph or two but it keeps me on track and is a great aid.

 

It’s Monday. I’ve had most of the available weather types in one day here where I am. I have to look at the calendar to remind myself it is April! Definitely time for a story then.

Hope you enjoy my latest on YouTube – Jam Today. Will Margery finally beat Wilma in the village show competition and just what is that on Mrs Anderson’s chocolate cake? Find out here.

 

I’m going to be talking about some of my favourite writing exercises for a future Chandler’s Ford Today post. Will share more on this nearer the time but I would estimate 90% of all of my flash fiction is written thanks to a prompt from an exercise!

I love writing exercises, find they challenge me and I just love the fun of responding to that challenge. I must admit I think the toughest one to do is the middle line one where you have to plan to get to that point and plan again to get to the ending. I find it easier to either start from an opening line or know where the end is thanks to having a closing line as a prompt.

Good practice to have a go at all three and the various other exercises available. I find they stretch my creativity and the possibilities can be tremendous from the different exercises available.

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Had a nice surprise the other day in that WordPress notified me I have now written 1000 posts on my blog with them (which is part of my website). I don’t tend to keep a tally of things like that so it was nice to get the notification. Where has the time gone? I update my blog twice a week (Tuesdays and Fridays) usually.

If you want to find out more about what I’ve written here do check out my blog page at https://allisonsymescollectedworks.com/blog/

Do check out my older posts on the blog page. Plenty of writing tips there.

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Am looking forward to the next meeting of the Association of Christian Writers Flash Fiction group later this month where I’m planning to look at genres and flash.

Have got a draft story potentially for the Bridport Prize. Hope to be looking at that again tomorrow and to be sending it in by the end of the month. (Deadline is 31st May but I do follow my own advice about taking a couple of weeks off a deadline and using that as my send in date instead. Means I don’t miss anything!). I love the way they describe flash as being “the art of just enough”. That sums up flash fiction so well.

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Goodreads Author Blog – Working Out What to Read Next

Do you ever have problems working out what you’re going to read next? I must admit to being a bit “naughty” in that I don’t necessarily read in strict chronological order from my always large To Be Read pile, whether is the old school print pile or the electronic one on my Kindle!

I don’t have this issue if I’m reading a series. I’ll just follow on.

When not doing that, I will go by my mood. If I’ve just enjoyed a crime story, I may well read another one straight off the back of the first one. However, I never read more two books in a row in the same genre.

After two, I want to ring the changes a bit. At the moment, I’m on my second non-fiction book in a row so when I come to the end of that, I will go for fiction again. I’ve not decided yet what the genre will be.

In between novels, I will read short story and flash collections before resuming novel reading again. Then it will come full circle and I will be back to the non-fiction. I am keen to make sure I have a good balance of reading material and like to mix up classic and contemporary here as well.

Why limit your reading after all?

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