Honest and Dishonest Characters

 

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Hope you have had a good week. Lady has had a fabulous time with her closest friends. I’ve had a lovely trip to the local theatre and good writing news which I hope to share before too long.

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Delighted to share Honest and Dishonest Characters for Chandler’s Ford Today this week. Fun piece to write especially given literature is full of excellent examples of both types of creation. I look at some of the aspects you need to consider when creating these and share thoughts and tips. Hope you find it useful.

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Am off to see The Chameleon Theatre Group perform Sudden Death at Thornbury Manor later this evening. Will review it for Chandler’s Ford Today in due course. The audience get to interrogate the cast as part of the performance which should be good fun. Have not been to an “interactive” murder mystery play before. Looking forward to reporting back later.

I see going to plays like this as another way of taking in stories. It’s not a bad idea to try to visualise your own stories as if someone was acting them out.

It can be a good aid to ensuring your dialogue sounds right, helps you cut down description (for a play you would see this as a visual set – can your readers picture your scenes easily enough?), and will show you whether all of your characters are playing a vital role in the story or not. If one or more doesn’t seem to have “much to do”, do you really need them in the tale?

Hope you have had a good Wednesday. Lady had a fabulous time in the park with her Hungarian Vizler and Rhodesian Ridgeback pals. Came home tired but happy.

Don’t forget my next Chandler’s Ford Today post is upon Friday when I’ll be looking at Honest and Dishonest Characters. Fun piece to write which I hope you will find useful and thoughtful. See above.

Marketing Tip: Consistency matters. I find it useful to focus on those social media outlets and marketing tasks I know I can keep going. So select what you would enjoy most and stick with that.

I like preparing an author newsletter and my YouTube videos, for example, so I have no problems being consistent with producing these. As much as possible, your marketing as well as your writing should be fun for you too. (Or as much fun as possible most of the time anyway!).

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Pleased to be back on Friday Flash Fiction with my latest tale, Same Old Thing.

Hope you enjoy it. Good to finish the working week with an enjoyable tale I think. Do check out the rest of what is on FFF – you will have plenty of good reading here.

24th April
Hope today has gone well. Am off to see my excellent local theatre company perform an interactive murder mystery. Should be fun. Led me to think though all of our stories should be interactive in that they should engage your readers so they are gripped by the situation and world you are showing them. No pressure then!

I do believe we are our own first readers though and if I’m not gripped by my characters, I can’t honestly expect anyone else to be.

Have come across another flash competition I may have a go at which specifies a character count rather than a word one (and yes it is linked to X or Twitter as I still prefer to think of it as).

Today, 23rd April, is both the birthday and anniversary of death day for William Shakespeare. Not sure what he would have thought of flash fiction given the length of his plays! But in the wonderful writing world, there is room for all word counts and styles (which is yet another reason to love being part of the overall writing community).

Writing Thought: Why not take one of Shakespeare’s famous quotes and use it as a theme for one of your own stories, flash or otherwise? What could you make of “a rose by any other name would smell as sweet” as a theme, for example? Shakespeare was right on that one but could you come up with a tale which proved otherwise?


Fairytales with Bite – Crime in the Magical World

I love the Vimes novels within the late Sir Terry Pratchett’s magnificent Discworld series. The entire canon is superb but the Vimes books stand out for me and books like Men at Arms are excellent detective stories in their own right (and the fantasy setting makes them stand out more).

So thinking about your own magical/fantasy setting, which crimes could happen with in it? Are the crimes solved by magic or with good old fashioned police work (the Pratchett approach, which for me makes the books more real).

If you use magic to solve the crimes, bear in mind the criminals would almost certainly have used crime to commit their nefarious deeds so how can more magic overcome that?

You will need to give thought as to what magic can do and not do in your setting. There should be advantages and disadvantages to using it/not using it (as this will give more issues for your characters to think about as they work out what to do and will help increase tensions in your story).

Also think about the crimes which could only be committed in a magical world, what would these be? What is done to try to prevent them? Is there any kind of magical crime prevention agency and/or a detective one? Who could police the use of magic and what powers would they have to enforce this? How did the rules for the use of magic come into being in the first place?

This World and Others – Social Issues in the Magical or Sci-Fi World

Where magic or where science beyond what we know here exists in your setting, which social issues arise from them? Do these things create a have and have not society? If so, how is that handled? Are there any attempts to make things better for the have nots? Are there classes of citizens who are gifted with this kind of magic and/or science and do they share it or hoard it?

Has your magical/scientific setting over time benefited from the developments discovered or created? If so, how? Do these benefits help all? Those with the skills – are they revered or hated? Would others in your setting have good cause to fear them?

If your setting can survey other worlds, such as Earth, are there ideas we have they do not? Would they be prepared to steal them? If so, how would they go about this without drawing attention to the fact there was was an alien invasion going on (might cause panic!) or do they not worry about that? Have they raided other worlds before?

Scientific developments especially can cause two reasons – welcome and rejection. People can fear what they don’t understand so how would your setting’s people overcome this so new developments weren’t misunderstood or misrepresented?

The trouble with misunderstanding or misrepresenting something is the panic and resulting actions from that panic which in turn could cause social issues( rioting, maybe?).

Food for story thought there I hope.

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Hope you have had a good few days. Still no sign of any sunshine here, I’m afraid. Writing wise, am busy preparing blogs and a presentation as well as my usual fiction work. So glad to be able to do that indoors!

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I’m delighted to welcome back author, editor and publisher, Gill James, to Chandler’s Ford Today for an in-depth interview about her latest book, Natascha’s Story. This is aimed at the younger end of the children’s market and Gill wrote this book with her daughter, Ashleigh James, illustrating the book.

There is plenty of interest for all writers here with useful thoughts and tips we can all use, especially on marketing and writing.

Oh and do discover what domestic object Gill uses as a portal in this story. It’s not something I would have thought of!

Hope you enjoy the post.

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Another cold and murky day but Lady did get to play with Coco, the lovely Labradoodle, today and both dogs had a riotous time running around the park, which was great to see.

Don’t forget I’ll be sharing a wonderful interview with Gill James about her latest book, Natascha’s Story, on Chandler’s Ford Today. Link up tomorrow and there will be plenty for all writers to enjoy from this. See above.

Writing Thought: A question all writers need to be able to answer, regardless of what form you write in, is the classic What is your story (book) all about? The ideal is to be able to reply in one line. This is worth practicing as a writing exercise.

I usually say I write flash fiction and short stories, with flash being up to 100 words. If I’m asked about a specific story, I will share something about the character “star” of that tale.

Hope today has gone well for you. Still grey and murky here though Lady did get to see her Hungarian Vizler pal today which cheered both dogs.

Looking forward to the Association of Christian Writers Flash Fiction Group meeting later this month. Am also working on articles for Chandler’s Ford Today and Writers’ Narrative, as well as the flash fiction and short stories.

I love the mixture of fiction and non-fiction. Am never short of things to work on either. Over the course of a week, I end up spending about the same amount of time on each. My reading reflects my love of both types of writing too. Always keep it interesting!

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It’s good to be back on Friday Flash Fiction with another story. It’s a great way to finish the standard working week. Hope you like my latest here – Judging It Right. You can find out if my character, Beth, did judge it right after all (and many thanks for the comments in on this one so far).
When asked about what I write, the next question I often face is just what is flash fiction. I say it is any story which is 1000 words or fewer. I also then share the advantages of writing it.

It has to be character led but you can set those characters anywhere and at any time you want, so this means you can have a great deal of fun with genre here, including setting tales back in time. I also set them forward in time so I can have some fun with science fiction and fantasy here too.

What can often start off as a writing exercise (because you never get time in a lot of workshops to write more than a couple of hundred words or so at the time) can be polished up to become published stories. Nothing to dislike there!

A huge advantage to flash fiction writing is because it tends to be character led, you can not only put them where and when you want, but you can change their moods too!

I’ve written grumpy characters, sad ones, ghost ones, and characters who will put a smile on your face, amongst many others. All fun to do.

But taking one character and changing their mood in the course of a story could make a good structure for a tale or several. Why do they change? Is the change a positive one? Can they change back again? You get to decide but I know as a reader I am always fascinated by what makes a character change. I have to find out how and why and whether this is for the best or not so I keep reading.

So think about what would cause your character to change their mood – you will often a theme emerging from this too.

Fairytales with Bite – Love Is In the Air but Is It Magical or For Real?

I write this with St. Valentine’s Day fast approaching. With regard to your magical setting, do your characters have an equivalent day for celebrating all things love related or is something which simply isn’t done there and they would find us a bit odd for doing this?

Is magic allowed to be used to get characters to fall in love or is this banned? Where it has been allowed, what have been the consequences (and could there be funny ones here?).

Equally where magic is banned from this, how would your characters meet and form attachments with others? Are some things like love meant to be kept “real” with no suspicion of magic having been used to compel people?

Also, whichever way the rules work in your setting, could you write about characters who defy the rules? Again think of the consequences here because there could be some great stories resulting from that idea.

This World and Others – Relationships

Romance may not be uppermost in your mind as your write your fantasy stories, (I write this with 14th February almost with us once again), but could it form an interesting back drop to your main storyline? Even if not, what kinds of relationship do exist in your setting and between which characters?

Do any of your characters defy conventional expectations here and, if so, how and why? It’s always easiest to go with the flow rather than against it, especially if it isn’t just the immediate people around you who are against you. Why would anyone be prepared to defy what their whole society expects?

What other kinds of relationship exist in your setting? Are there families as we know them or are the makeup of these things literally alien from what we know?

When the relationship is a friendship rather than a blood relationship, how did the friendship come about? How is it going to be tested to the limit in your stories? (Should be too. Good example set here by Sam Gamgee and Frodo in The Lord of the Rings!).

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The Joys of Writing Dialogue

 

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Well, the New Year in the UK has got off to a very stormy start. Hope you are all okay. Plenty of flooding and high winds in my part of the world. Have well and truly christened the new boots received for Christmas!

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My first Chandler’s Ford Today post for the New Year is all about The Joys of Writing Dialogue. I love getting my characters to talk but I do have to ensure what I get them to say is relevant to their story and moves the tale on in some way. Otherwise there is a risk of conversational ping-pong which gets in the way of a good, pacy story.

I share thoughts and tips on what I’ve found useful in writing dialogue. I also share why knowing your character types helps with this aspect of writing too. Hope you enjoy the post and find it helpful.

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Hope you are all okay. Stormy weather today. Enjoyed my swim but that was the only occasion today when I welcomed getting wet. Even Lady didn’t like the heavy rain and it was very heavy. Did our walk in record time this afternoon!

Another reason to love creative writing – it is something you can do in the dry! Talking of which, I will be sharing The Joys of Writing Dialogue for Chandler’s Ford Today tomorrow. See above.

My interview with Val Penny will be Friday week so plenty of good things to look forward to (and I hope you enjoy reading them in the dry!).

Will be having a busy weekend looking at some drafts for competitions. Deadlines are in February but I follow my own advice to get my entries in at least ten days before said deadline, having gone through my scripts several times. Yes, even for flash. It’s amazing how typos can get through several edits.

The one consolation here is this happens to every writer but I know to look out for this and my final edit on anything is to specifically look for these. So I set myself dates where I will have an edit to check the story works done by a set date, then I will have another edit a few days later to ensure I am still happy with the plot and go through for errors. Then a few days later still I do my final edit for typos and get the story submitted. Then off to the next story!

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The weather was a complete contrast with yesterday. Lady and I didn’t get wet at all. She did get to see her best pal, the Rhodesian Ridgeback, and a riotous time was had by both of them.

Am looking forward to interviewing Val Penny for Chandler’s Ford Today again soon on her book of short stories. More details nearer the time but did I want to quiz a novelist about switching to the short form? You bet I did! All sorts of questions arose from that which I look forward to sharing later, along with Val’s answers.

Writing Tip: Never worry about rubbish first drafts. That’s the point of a first draft. You just get the story down and tidy up later. Nobody ever writes a perfect first draft. Shakespeare didn’t either. There is some consolation in that thought, I think!

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It’s great to be back on Friday Flash Fiction with my first story for 2024 called, aptly, A New Start. Find out if Gemma does actually have her own new start this time. Hope you enjoy the tale (and many thanks to those of you who have already commented on this one).
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Sometimes I use a theme as a title. One example of this is The Power of Suggestion in Tripping The Flash Fantastic. I get my character to show how the power of suggestion changed their life and whether it was for the good or not. Themes are fantastic hooks for stories and I like the thought of having a double whammy here by using them as titles as well.

Writing Thought: Why not write down a list of your favourite themes (and this can include proverbs and sayings too) and pick one or two to write stories up for? Think about your favourite films, TV shows, books etc – is there a common theme or two behind what you like most?

I’m attracted to the thought of people not always being what they seem (this is a classic idea in fairytales) so the moment I came across Strider in The Lord of the Rings, I did guess correctly there was more to this character than was apparent. I also thought this was true for Severus Snape in the Harry Potter series.

So do I write stories where characters are not all they seem to be? Oh yes! Simply because it is a theme I care about and working out what those are for you can be a great place to start when looking for new story ideas.

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There are several good reasons to have a try at the flash fiction and short story competitions.

Firstly, these are excellent ways to practice writing to deadlines.

Secondly, following the submission rules (and these do vary) gets you some useful practice in following any future guidelines on submissions of longer work.

Thirdly, if you are long or short listed or win or get a runner’s up spot, all of this makes for excellent material to put on your writing CV. This is especially true when you are submitting longer work. It will show a publisher/agent someone else judged your material to be of a standard to get any of those placings.

Fourthly, you get in useful practice in sticking to word counts. This is especially true of the flash fiction competitions where there are those who want you to write to an exact word count. Not one word more. Not one word less. It is a good idea, when you’re drafting flash for future use, to draft some which come in at the 250, 300, and 500 word counts as these are some of the most popular categories I’ve come across for competitions.

Flash Fiction focuses on THE important aspect of a character's life

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New Year Acrostic – Tips for Visitors to the Magical World

N = Never underestimate a fairy waving a wand.

E = Expect the worst if you come across a witch with a cauldron as she is highly unlikely to worry about your health and safety.

W = When visiting a magical world, expect strange creatures but the good thing is they’ll think you’re odd too.


Y = Your three wishes, if you are fortunate enough to get any, cannot be extended or transferred.

E = Expect high moral standards here, even with strange creatures about – greed is generally looked down on, for example.

A = Always treat anyone you meet with respect – you never know what powers they’ve got and prudence is a good thing here.

R = Restrict yourself to following the proper tour with guide and don’t go wandering off – it won’t end well for you if you do.

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This World and Others – Beginnings

At the start of a new year, it is natural to think about beginnings. For fiction, we can look at beginnings for characters but also for settings.

How did your magical world begin? How did it get to where it is now in terms of development? Has the use of magic enhanced your setting or weakened it? Have there been magical wars? Has power had to be controlled to stop chaos erupting?

For example, if magic polluted your world, was there a point when the “bosses” said enough was enough and limited the use of magic to prevent further damage? How did your setting and characters then cope with a new beginning of limited magical use? How difficult was it to adjust?

For your characters, what beginnings have they had to face up to and were these welcome or not? What are they leaving behind so they have their new beginning? Do they have regrets or are they only too glad to have a new start (and what could lead them to feeling that way)?

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