Using Dates in Fiction

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Hope all well. Has been so hot here over the last few days. Gosport in Hampshire has recently shattered a heat record. We’re taking Lady out early and then keeping her in. She’s doing well but isn’t keen on this level of heat.
Writing wise, am progressing okay but will find it easier to progress more when the temperature comes down a bit!

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Pleased to share Using Dates in Fiction on Chandler’s Ford Today this week.

I look at various ways of using dates in our stories including usages in historical fiction, science fiction and fantasy where the dating system may well be so different to ours, and I ask what dates can mean to our characters too. There will be plenty of ideas to be written up around that last thought alone.

I also look at using dates to create settings, time frames and time/dates as a plot device. I discuss dates for the writer too.

Hope you find the post useful.

Using Dates in Fiction

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Another scorcher of a day, another quiet one for Lady though she is managing well and drinking plenty of water, as are we.

Writing wise, I’ll be sharing Using Dates in Fiction for Chandler’s Ford Today this week. Lots of useful thoughts here which I hope will trigger plenty of story ideas. Link up tomorrow. See above.

Will be hosting another online group for the Association of Christian Writers next week and am looking forward to that. Plus my next author newsletter is due out on the same day, next Wednesday. How can it be almost July already? Mind you, I have great reasons to look forward to next month. More to come when I have it.

Character Tip: You know your character. You know what they’re capable of and why. Now think of something they might say or do which would catch you and readers off guard. This can bring in great twists to your tale and show you even more about your creation.

If you know, for example, your character is scrupulously honest because they were let down big time by continual lies earlier in their life, readers will understand that. But what if your character then does go and lie, especially if this seems to come out of the blue? I would immediately want to look for the reason in the change of behaviour and there will be at least one.

On this example, I would wonder if they were shielding someone else. Also I will go back and look through the story to see if there were any hints something unexpected might come. There usually is something on a second read.

Crime stories do this all of the time but it can work just as well for other forms of fiction. Incidentally the hint can come in a variety of means such as the character admitting they could do anything to protect someone they love or had done so in the past etc etc.

Wow, it’s been so hot. Hope you are all well and taking good care. Lady out early and then home again for the rest of the day. She’s not sorry. Neither are we. Will be the same again tomorrow and probably Friday too.

Writing wise, I’m trying to start my writing sessions earlier than usual because I do find the heat has a direct impact on my concentration levels (and I drink loads of water etc because I should and because it aids concentration). So it is a question of doing what I can and be as comfortable as possible. Let’s just say I’m already looking forward to a swim tomorrow!

Still the good thing with writing flash fiction and short stories is I can write in short stints and still get plenty done.

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Today would have been my father’s 89th birthday. Dates and anniversaries can be wonderful things, sad ones, funny and much more.

Funnily enough, I discuss Using Dates in Fiction for my Chandler’s Ford Today post this week (see above) but dates/anniversaries are wonderful things to write flash fiction around. They make for a good “peg” to hang the action on.

What, in your story, makes this date/anniversary stand out especially? What has happened to make it more memorable than usual? What does your character make of an anniversary someone else wants to celebrate but they do not?

There are plenty of ways to use dates in stories and, yes, there is such a thing as a random date generator out there. Mind you, the old school way of picking a page at random from your diary and using that date as a focus for your story would also work well!

Hope you’re all keeping well and as cool as possible. Lady managing okay but she loathes this heat and I can’t say I blame her. I heard on the radio earlier that visualising cooler things can help. Hmm… can’t say it’s worked for me so far.

But talking of visualising, when you create your characters do you tend to visualise what they look like? It isn’t the first priority for me. I like to hear them speaking. (I don’t know whether that is because of my life long love of radio coming into play here or whether, back in the day, on the old TV sets you tended to get the sound through first and then the picture). I do get a clearer picture of my characters once I know how they speak though.

This is the joy of the creative process though. Different things work for different writers. It is a question of finding what works for you, I think. (And if one way doesn’t seem to hit your creative spot, then it’s time to try another. You will find what’s right for you writing wise but it can be a question of trial and error).

I don’t tend to use weather much in my flash fiction and short stories. Certainly I’m not planning to write anything about the current heatwave. Not sure there is much of a story in getting my characters to reflect my views – I don’t like this! Mind you, being a dog owner does colour my views here. Both Lady and I much prefer a temperature in the lower twenties.

But you could use the thought of something colouring a character’s views to come up with some interesting story ideas. If a character is kind and generous but won’t be towards another character, there will be reasons (and stories) behind that, for example.

The good thing here is you get to decide what would colour your character’s views (and therefore attitudes and behaviours) and by how much. Can you get a character with a strong opinion which goes against the grain for the other characters in your story to come across as having good reasons to be as they are and even be a sympathetic character?

It would be a good challenge.

Fairytales With Bite – Magical Words

Now I know I’m biased as a writer and editor but I do believe words are magical in and of themselves. When I think about how many stories I’ve loved, and continue to love, I believe I have a good point. Stories are so much part of what makes us human.

But what about our characters who are anything but human? Which stories and/or words would they consider to be magical and why? What impact do these things have on them? How have they shaped them? Would your character’s favourite stories bear any resemblance to those we have here? (It is amazing, for example, just how many variants of the Cinderella story there are and how far in time it goes back too).

Who would have written the stories your characters love? How did they get to be such a special part of your character’s world? Has anyone ever tried to suppress and/or rewrite them to suit their purposes?

Who would be considered to be the overall guardian of your setting’s magical words and stories, how did they get that role, and how good a job do they do? Definite story ideas there.

This World and Others – Literature with Meaning

I believe all literature has at least some meaning. Even the funniest, frothiest of stories have meaning simply because they are great at helping people escape for a while. For me, that is the definition of a good read. I often will not want “serious” reading. I want to be entertained and I see nothing wrong in that.

So when I look for meaning in any story, I am looking for the impact it had on me, for good or bad. I know there are some stories I won’t be reading again because the impact they made on me was I’ve read this once, I don’t need to read it again. Incidentally another definition of a good read for me is wanting to re-read tales.

Anyway, in your setting, especially if it is nothing like our own dear planet, what would your characters see as literature with meaning? Do they read it themselves or only do so when they have to (at school for example)? Is literature readily available to all or only to the select few? If the latter, can literature somehow “escape” by devious means so others can get to see it and, if so, who would be behind that and why are they doing it?

Literature has impact. Not everyone welcomes that here! This could apply easily to other settings. What would be the story of your character who is an author who writes something they know their regime won’t like it? What drives them to do it? Do they get their work out there? Is the impact as expected or not? What would the literature getting out to the masses do to your setting? It could change so much.

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Hope you have had a great weekend. Lovely one here. Very warm so keeping Lady in the cool as much as possible but we have especially enjoyed woodland walks. Writing and editing going well. It has been nice being able to have my office doors open long into the evening over the last few days. Coolness helps the brain I find!

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Even hotter day so Lady has stayed at home more. One brief session out this morning, she’ll have another later, but being in the (relatively) cool and shade is the order for the rest of this week.

The pavement test is useful and a potential life saver. I tested the ground outside the leisure centre where I swim just as I came home from there today. You’re supposed to be able to hold your hand on the pavement for a good fifteen seconds. I didn’t manage two. No going out for Lady this afternoon then. So be careful, folks. Thankfully our garden has plenty of shrubs and shade so Lady has enjoyed some time out there.

Writing wise, I’m looking forward to the next meeting of the Association of Christian Writers Flash Fiction Group tomorrow.

And I’ve seen the draft of my book cover for Seeing The Other Side. Very exciting, more news to come on this later.

Writing Tip: Finding it hard to concentrate in this current heatwave? Keep drinks to hand (ideally non-alcoholic – you want refreshment here, honest!). Write in short stints. Break. Write again. And do give flash fiction a go – but then I’m bound to say that!

Another hot day so limited exercise for Lady. She is pretty sensible and stays in the shade. Unlike my previous two dogs, I don’t need to persuade her to drink water either – she goes for it, the other two I had to bribe them to get them to have any. Still, where we are, we have woods near by and my house is north facing, all of which is helping a lot right now. Hope you are keeping your cool where you are.

Shared my latest Substack story on that platform yesterday. Here’s your chance to see it here. Hope you enjoy Make Your Mind Up. A lot of dog owners will identify with this one and I hope it raises a smile or two.

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Hope the weekend is going well with you. Very hot here. Lady staying out of it.

Writing wise, I’m looking forward to getting on with flash fiction Sunday shortly. Am keeping the office nice and cool – it is bliss to be in here. I also have a board my laptop rests on which has an inbuilt fan. It’s useful when the weather is this hot.

The editing work is going well too.

There won’t be a post from me this month on More Than Writers, the blog spot for the Association of Christian Writers, as ACW is moving the platform for this. I hope to be back in June on this and hope and pray the transfer goes well.

It’s a gloriously sunny day here today (23rd May) but you’ll be glad to know Lady is keeping things nice and cool.

Writing wise, I’ll be sharing a fabulous interview with fellow Swanwicker, Esther Chilton, for Chandler’s Ford Today on Friday. She’ll be discussing her second book in her six part Saffy’s Secret Quest series which is called Myths and Magic. Plenty of useful thoughts for all writers here. Do look out for that next week.

As well as the Association of Christian Writers Flash Fiction Group meeting next week, I’m looking forward to revisiting The Dorset Museum in Dorchester with editing colleagues. We went to a Jane Austen exhibition here last year which was great. This time, we’re looking at the life and times of Thomas Hardy, someone I admit I’ve never read. I expect that will change! Naturally I’m looking forward to getting some writing done on the train trip here.

Oh and one joy of turning the big 60 in March is discovering I now qualify for the Senior Railcard which gives me discounts on train trips for the whole country and not just my network. Am planning to put this to good use! Plenty of opportunities for trips out, making notes on my trips and drafting some flash fiction – all good to me!

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As I mentioned over on my author page, I have seen the draft cover for Seeing The Other Side. Looking forward to being able to share that in due course. Seeing the cover, albeit as a draft at this stage, brings it home this really is happening and you don’t lose the thrill of being published. I just wish I could bottle the feeling to be able to imbibe it during those times when the writing life is on the tougher side.

But this is why it is important to celebrate your small wins as well as your larger ones. The smaller wins mount up over time, for one thing. For another, just getting anything out there which is your creation is so special and should always be celebrated.

It’s a hot Bank Holiday Monday in the UK today (25th May 2026) but for me the important point is it still a Monday and that means story time. I hope you enjoy my latest on YouTube – A Canine Wish. There is a dog theme this week, what with my Substack story too, but I hope you enjoy both tales or should that be tails?

 

Am enjoying sharing stories on Substack as well as YouTube. Substack has proved surprisingly easy to you, which is always welcome, because there nearly always are teething issues as you get used to a new website, form of social media etc.

Have got my entry in for The Bridport Prize. The deadline is the end of May so there is still time if you fancy trying this. Hope to pick another competition to try next weekend.

I’ve been returning to the good old dribble, the 50 words story, for Substack and YouTube recently and hope to continue with this.

Hope the weekend has got off to a good start. It’s a long weekend here in the UK given Monday is a Bank Holiday. (To me, Monday is Monday but there you go).

Hope to resume looking for flash fiction competitions to have a crack at from next weekend as I’m busy editing as well as writing at the moment and, of course, it won’t be that long now before Seeing The Other Side comes out. There will be plenty to do when it is out! Having said that, this kind of work is such a joy to do.

I will be cracking on with my usual flash fiction Sunday tomorrow though, which is always a great way to end the week/start the next one (delete as you see fit! I see Sunday as the end of a week but know not everyone does).

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I love all aspects to stories but some do stand out more for me as I suspect they do for most people. One favourite aspect is dialogue between the characters. Having been intrigued by the story’s opening, this is the point where the characters start to come to life for me and it is here I am keen to find out what happens to them.

Dialogue reveals so much about character attitude, as well as revealing aspects of back story, and I think that is why I am always gripped by well written examples of this. Well written for me is when it reveals what I need to know and I feel not a word could be added or taken away without losing something important.

I must admit when it comes to writing my own tales, I have to make sure I don’t get into “conversational ping pong”. It is huge fun to write but not necessarily for a reader to read and it is what they need which has to come first.

I so want to get behind a character to root for them whether it is to succeed or fail (the latter generally for villains). I want the ending of the story to deliver on its premise. I want to feel that yes, this was the right ending for these characters and their circumstances.

I guess what I am saying here is I really do want a good read! Well, I’m not alone on that wish, am I?

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