New Stories and Opening Lines

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Hope you’ve had a good weekend. Quiet one ahead of two busy ones coming up. Cooling down, even had some rain, but more is needed. Feel sorry for those fighting the wildfires.
Writing going all okay. Set up my card reader so it is ready to use – it was easier than I thought which was nice.

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Hope today has gone well. Is becoming hotter again so am being careful with the dog again. Having said that, she’s fine but she’d like the thermostat turned down a bit, as would I.

Writing wise, my next author newsletter goes out on 1st August (Saturday!) and I’ve plenty to share this time, of course. I also share story links to my work on Substack and YouTube and offer writing tips and advice. To sign up do head over to my landing page at https://allisonsymescollectedworks.com

There’s nothing quite like writing a monthly newsletter to bring home the thought the year is whizzing by.

In other news, I’ve just heard my Bridport Prize entry won’t be going any further. On the plus side, this means I can have another look at this tale when I have more time and see if I can send it somewhere else. I’ve done this before and sometimes a piece has found a home on the second go around.

The writing life is full of ups and downs but you do get used to this. You learn to make the most of the up periods when you have them too!

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Another busy Monday so that means it’s time to share here the story I shared on my Substack platform yesterday. Both this story and the YouTube one I’ll share on my book page shortly are based on a blue hat. Two stories out of one object? Oh yes! Also both are at the 75 words mark. Hope you enjoy both of them but first up from Substack is my The Blue Hat.

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Many apologies but I forgot to share my Authors Electric post from just over a week ago but I am pleased to share it now. I talk about New Stories this time.

I know why I forgot. I’ve been full of the publication of Seeing The Other Side, of course, but this post looks at the joy of having new stories to share for things like Open Prose Mic Nights and the like. I like to mix up new and old stories and the moods of those tales for events like these so there is a good balance.

I also look at the advantage of reading work out loud even when it’s not for an audience. I continue to find it can be a great editing tool. I’ve often spotted things like missing words doing this and they can be the devil to spot precisely because they’re not there but when you read out loud, that is when you suddenly realise the gap.

Hope you enjoy the post and, again, apologies for the late share.

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Hope your weekend has got off to a good start. Have finally invested in a card reader for book events and have now got it set up and good to go. Regardless of what the tech is, I know from experience it pays to give yourself plenty of time here! Still all seems to be okay and it will be lovely to be able to offer card payment facilities at book events.

Writing wise, I’ll be sharing Reworking Stories on Chandler’s Ford Today next week. The week after that, I hope to be sharing a super interview with Val Penny so do watch out for that. And then after that I’m off to Swanwick again – the year whizzes by.

Review Tip: As with any author with books out there, I will put in a plea for reviews. They don’t need to be long. They do need to be honest. One line reviews are absolutely fine and a good tip here is to think about what you liked most about the book and go with that. These make for excellent reviews. Reviews do help authors more than it might appear at face value so please do give a review.

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Pleased Tuesday has been somewhat calmer than Monday. Enjoyed a lovely swim earlier too. I remember thinking when I took swimming up seriously I could use this time to work out story ideas etc. Not a bit of it.

You focus on what you’re doing – rightly so – for one thing. I also find you tend to “switch off” which is lovely and I am sure that does refresh me, mentally speaking, for work at the old desk later in the day. I can’t recall writing any flash fiction based around the swimming world. Hmm… will have to rectify that at some point.

But things like swimming, going out with the dog etc can inspire story ideas even if they don’t seem to do so directly. I’ve spotted, say, a striking hat being worn by someone and “pinch the hat” to use for a character of mine who I know would just wear something like that.

Sometimes objects you see while out and about can be a great trigger for a story idea. (And there is always the random object generators to fall back on too. Plus don’t forget the photos on your phone. What view did you take a shot of which could be used as a story setting, say?).

Happy writing!

Monday – busy, hot, my least favourite day of the week as you may well have gathered by now. Mind you, it does mean it’s story time.

Hope you enjoy my The Return. As with my Substack story this week (see above), this video also features a blue hat but I take a very different take on what can be done with it in this tale.

One person’s bargain from a charity shop is another one’s horror story. Find out more here about what possible bargain this could be.

 

Will be getting on with flash fiction Sunday in a short while. Am also looking forward to catching up with members of the Association of Christian Writers Flash Fiction Group on Wednesday too. Will be hosting another group for ACW the week after and then I’m off to Swanwick so next couple of weeks will be delightfully busy.

Flash Tip for Specific Word Counts: Now this is a specific tip if ever there was one! I’ve found it useful to look at what 50 words, 100 words etc looks like on screen/paper. It gives me a visual aid as to what I should be aiming for here. I then draft my stories, knowing roughly what it should like to get to the desired word count.

I always go over the limit but then go through and cut out my wasted words which brings the count down. I wish I could stop myself writing those wasted words in the first place but it doesn’t work that way for me so I go with the flow here, happy in the knowledge these things won’t be in the story for long.

Looking forward, as always, to flash fiction Sunday tomorrow. Nice way to wind up one week and to start another one.

I do miss writing for Friday Flash Fiction and haven’t yet found somewhere suitable for me to submit regularly. It was that aspect of regular submissions I found most useful for FFF. Am sure I will find somewhere eventually. (Am also sorry Flash NANO is no longer about).

Having said that, I am enjoying posting stories to Substack and YouTube and will continue. Incidentally I do share all of my links to my stories on a monthly basis via my newsletter so you can easily see them all in “one hit” there so to speak.

I never mind doing this kind of marketing! I want there to be something in it for a potential audience and there is something lovely about sharing stories.

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I enjoy creating intriguing opening lines for my flash fiction and short stories. Great fun to do. I also love reading intriguing opening lines. They do keep me reading on, which of course is the whole idea. The tricky bit though is in working out what will be intriguing to a reader given tastes vary.

Having something different which can indicate an interesting time period or setting is a good way to start. The classic one here is from Orwell’s 1984. The thought of a clock striking thirteen is fascinating.

But irony as in Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice is also a wonderful start. It leads to wondering whether the premise of that opening line (which I won’t give away here and in any case I am sure you know it) will be delivered on. The only way to find out is to read the book.

I must admit I have a soft spot for stories, including my own, which start with dialogue or a character’s internal thoughts. You get to have a feel for the character’s attitude and from that what might come further on in the story just from this alone.

A successful opening line then is one which makes you read on to the finishing one. You can write the most amazing finish to a story but unless the opening is equally fantastic nobody will get to the end and that’s the challenge every fiction writer faces. It’s a cracking challenge though!

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Hope you have had a good weekend. It was soggy with me. Time for some autumn sunshine I think. I do love the changing leaf colours at this time of year. Lady doesn’t care much what the weather is as long as she goes out and has a great time (ideally with friends too). Hope to have some news of another book event I’ll be involved in before long too.

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Hope you’ve had a good Tuesday. Weather still damp and dreary here. I do prefer the crisper, drier autumn days!

Had a turn down for one of my stories come in today. Will have another look at the tale and see if I can polish it further and sent it out elsewhere. Have done this before and had work accepted on the second or third attempt. Worth a go.

On the other side of the fence here, I will be putting on my judge’s hat for a flash fiction competition soon. Looking forward to that.

Am also preparing some other submissions as well as editing at the moment so plenty to keep me occupied. I like it that way. I also like the mixture of writing fiction and non-fiction. Both are interesting challenges. I like the variety too.

459114764_10162228394567053_3916676174138914329_nLady has had a marvellous start to her week in that she caught up with her Rhodesian Ridgeback pal, whom she hasn’t seen for a few days, today. The dogs had a great run, a playfight (I know – Lady’s 7 and the Ridgeback is 6 but they still love doing this, overgrown pups that they are), and a massive run around together. Both went home tired but very happy.

Pleased to say there will be further author interviews to come for Chandler’s Ford Today. I have two lined up for the end of September on successive weeks and I will be preparing another one very shortly which will eventually appear in October.

I love author interviews whether I read them, listen to them, or conduct them. I always learn something interesting and I find it endlessly fascinating finding out how other writers find their inspiration, what marketing tips they’ve found most useful etc. We can and should all learn from each other, I think.
I have a page over on CFT and you can find it at the link.

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So far today there has been thunder, heavy rain, and sunshine. Wonder what the rest of the afternoon and evening will bring!

Looking forward to the Association of Christian Writers Flash Fiction Group meeting later this month. We’ll be looking at marketing, which is always a useful topic.

Flash fiction is good to share as part of an overall marketing campaign. It doesn’t take up much reading time. It gives readers something entertaining and different too. It shows something of your style and work. It makes it more likely they’ll check out what else you do.

What I’ve never found appealing as a reader is the buy, buy, buy approach (it comes across as nagging!) so my own take here is to share something of value such as a flash story, mention my books, and then share tips etc. I think it makes marketing more palatable to me as the writer and I hope to others as potential/actual readers.

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Will be looking at Books, Movies, and Music for Chandler’s Ford Today next week. When you’re writing on three wonderful things, the post can’t help but be a joy to write. Am looking forward to sharing it on Friday. It was inspired by the recent Classic FM Movie Music Hall of Fame.

Writing Tip: I find it useful to prepare bits and pieces for my newsletter throughout the month so towards the end of the four or five week period, I can just edit what I’ve got, put it any final story links and then said newsletter is good to go. Find this useful and jotting down things for my newsletter as and when is another good use of those pockets of time we all get.

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I’ve signed up to take part in Flash NANO once more. It won’t be that long before this starts (1st November). For the last couple of years, I’ve managed to produce something to all thirty prompts. Some have since been published, others I’m saving for a further flash collection, and others I know won’t make the cut. It happens.

What I got from those tales was having a go at the prompt set (some of which were types I’d not tried before) and being able to produce something to it. That cheered me up at the time especially when I was tempted to think I haven’t written a story like this before, I’m not going to do this, but yes, I found I could.

Whether I’ll come back to these later and see if I can do something more with them, I don’t know. I do find with all writing prompts though they are a great way in to my writing work for the day. They almost act like a “warm up” and that is useful in and of itself.

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It’s Monday. It’s been as hectic as ever, albeit the weather at least was drier than over a soggy weekend. But given it is still Monday (and I agree with Garfield the cat about Mondays), it is time for a story. Hope you like my latest on YouTube – Another Time.

 

It doesn’t seem like two years since we lost the Queen. Where does the time go?

Time and anniversaries (including the happier ones naturally) are great topics for flash fiction. What does an anniversary mean to your character especially if they’re in a situation where they face it alone? Which anniversaries would they welcome? Which do they go out of their way to avoid?

Also wedding anniversaries have associations – the 40th anniversary being a ruby one, for example. You could take something like the object here and weave a story around that. I did so a little while ago with Ruby on my YouTube channel. See link.

 

Have submitted an autumn themed story this week. Am looking forward to flash fiction Sunday afternoon tomorrow. And I hope to soon have news of a book event where I hope to spread the word about flash fiction – more news when I have it. Plenty going on then and I’m editing too.

Many thanks for the comments coming in on my latest story on Friday Flash Fiction – The Clock. Also thanks for the comments on it on my Facebook page. Much appreciated. I’ve been talking recently about using numbers in stories and one way to do so is to use the number as a time. Here I went a step further and used the time measuring device instead.
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B = Brilliant “device” for education and entertainment.
O = Original stories coming out all the time plus the classics to enjoy.
O = Other formats suit the book too – ebook, audio, hardback, paperback – something for all.
K = Kindle reading has led me to finding authors new to me and I often go on to buy their paperbacks later.
S = Stories, single or series, set in all worlds and this one – what’s not to like about that?

 

F = Fairytales, fantasy, and flash fiction – these are three of my favourite book things to misquote The Sound of Music.
O= Originality in the sharing of non-fiction has led to creative non-fiction, which I adore.
R = Reviews – I give them and, like all authors, would like some for my works – reviews do help authors.

 

L = Libraries are fantastic and encourage a life long love of reading.
I = Imagination fired and not just for fiction – what ideas from the past, as shared in books, have led to new inventions or developments?
F = Frankly, my dear, I think the book is one of humanity’s best inventions to misquote Gone With The Wind.
E = Enjoy your books and I think it is no coincidence some of the best films are based on books (because it has been proven the stories already work!).

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This time I share the May 2024 edition which had memoir as its theme. My article talked about Using Memoir Techniques for Character Creation.

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