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Love Stories and When Writing Doesn’t Love You

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Hope you’ve had a good weekend. Lovely one here, even saw some sunshine. Writing going well and have finally started submitting competition entries. Have done this before – off to a slow start but then I just keep going. Lady still getting plenty of mud on her at the moment, not that she minds this!

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Hope today has gone well. Lady enjoyed seeing her Hungarian Vizler friend and loved playing with Coco the lovely Labradoodle. Lady has also had a huge walk with me this afternoon. Lady loved it. Has had a great day.

Looking forward to going to a friend’s online book launch on Friday evening. Plus, aptly, I’ll be discussing Writing Events on Chandler’s Ford Today on Friday. My next post on Authors Electric is out tomorrow and will be about The Shortest Time. More tomorrow on that but it is an apt title for a flash fiction writer. Could be a good story title too…hmm…. Now there’s a thought.

Character Tip: What kinds of characters do you like? Why do you think this is? Now have another look at their stories and watch out for where their good qualities, the ones you love, show up the most. It will almost certainly be in what they do and possibly in the attitudes they show. But how has the author shown you this? What can you learn from this to apply to your own creations?

Hope your Monday has gone well. Lady’s day got off to a cracking start given she saw her Hungarian Vizler and Rhodesian Ridgeback pals today. Lovely to have some sunshine too.

Plenty of writing work done over the weekend so was happy with how that went. Will be getting on with my usual Monday bits and pieces and then look forward to having more writing time as the week goes on. Am never sorry to get Monday behind me though I do get lots done, just not as much as I’d like on the writing front.

Now I have some competition entries out there, I’d like later this week to pick another couple to try and then write stories up for them. There are a couple of big competitions I like to try so will be having a go at those in due course.

And a huge thank you to Jenny Sanders for flagging up Hannah Kate will be having her Spring Equinox flash fiction show again on North Manchester FM. To find out more, do click on the link (and get drafting! Note to self: do likewise!). Deadline is 16th March 2026. Story length is three minutes maximum recording time. I find about 125 to 150 words is about right usually but to make sure I record my final draft on Zoom and play it back so I can hear how it sounds and get the timing right. Zoom gives you the timing which is so handy for things like this.

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Hope today has gone well. Soggy again here – surprise, surprise not!

Writing wise, I’ll be looking at Writing Events for Chandler’s Ford Today next week. I’ll be sharing some thoughts on residential, day events, Zoom ones too, and discuss what I look for when deciding what to go for here. I also share the general benefits to writers in going to good writing events because there are quite a few benefits. Post up on Friday (and that will be around again before we know it!).

Have finally sent in some story competition entries. Have been a bit slow to get started here but now I have started, I will aim to keep going.

Don’t forget if you have subscribed to Writers’ Narrative, now they’re on Substack, you will receive an article on the topic of the month every couple of days or so. You’ll also be able to easily look up articles you’ve missed. My next one here will be in early March. I must admit I’ve found Substack pleasantly easy to use (and I haven’t always been able to say that for a platform new to me).

14th February 2026 – St. Valentine’s Day

As the rhyme says, roses are red, violets are blue
You love writing but it doesn’t always love you!
Allison Symes – 14th February 2026

Do you ever feel that way? I think most writers can feel this way sometimes. Often it is a case you’re tired. I find a few earlier nights, less writing, a bit more reading, and more sleep help clear this feeling away. We’re not machines (is anyone else tired of being asked to confirm they’re not a robot by the way?).

Creativity of any kind is wonderful for the brain but when we’re tired, it’s time to be kind to yourself. Breaks will help you get back to normal writing activity more quickly in the long run.

I find having evenings when I can’t do much writing a help, funnily enough, because when my writing time does increase again, I’m keen to get back to it and hit the ground running. I use those small periods of time when I can’t do much else for writing admin and other tasks I want to get out of the way. That helps a lot as I reward myself with being creative again when I do have more time.

And I can’t stress enough about getting enough sleep because that kind of thing does help your creative side. Being overtired does get in the way of it and I’ve found that one out the hard way years ago. It’s a mistake I try not to make now. It pays.

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Am looking forward to next week’s meeting of the Association of Christian Writers Flash Fiction Group.

Will also be sharing something a bit special in my next author newsletter due out on 1st March. Am looking forward to getting that out there. If you’d like to find out more, do sign up at my landing page at https://allisonsymescollectedworks.com

One great use for those small pockets of time we all get but can’t do a lot with is to draft a flash piece, say a 50 or 100 worder. The old school method of notebook and pen is wonderful here and I use typing up my drafts from these (as I do after Swanwick each year) as my first edit. But getting something down on paper to work on further later on always cheers me. I know I can do something with this story later on.

I’ve used five/ten minutes productively too. I’m also old school enough to sometimes like getting back to pen and paper too. Mind you, I remember literally cutting and pasting when I worked as a secretary. I’m not at all sorry cutting and pasting on a PC/laptop is far better and easier!

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It has been another hectic Monday. Time to wind down with a story then. Hope you like my latest on YouTube – Magical Suppliers.

Has a shop keeper found the best way of stopping the evilly inclined in the magical world? Find out here.

 

Mid-month already though I think February is short-changed because January hogged all the days! Flash fiction Sunday will start for me shortly. Am looking forward to the Association of Christian Writers Flash Fiction Group meeting later this month. Our topic will be On This Day. Incidentally, that would be a great theme or title for a story. Why not give it a go?

F = Flash is fantastic to write and read.
L = Language is there for you to play with for you to make the most of your word count.
A = Adjective usage is something you will hone again to make the most of the word count – your character will race up a hill rather than run up the hill quickly.
S = Story impact will be strong because there is no room for the old purple prose, you do have to stick to the point of the story.
H = Have fun setting your characters in different genres and times – I do.

Flash fiction is remarkably versatile. Restrictions, such as word counts, can do much to encourage your creativity.

Flash fiction, like any kind of storytelling, must have a proper beginning, middle and end. It is just “condensed” to a tight word count. I find it useful, for a 100 word tale, to have my opening paragraph set the dilemma my character faces. The second paragraph shows how they try to overcome it and the last paragraph will show the results.

I’ve long found having a rough structure to my stories helps make them work. I know what I must have achieved by the first third of the story, what the middle must do (and that will help keep things interesting and stop it from sagging), and then a natural lead into the conclusion.

Structure sounds boring but it is a crucial component to all stories.

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I write this on 14th February 2026, St. Valentine’s Day. Love stories are a crucial part of our literature. I’m sure when asked to name love stories, the following will come to mind:-

Romeo and Juliet
Pride and Prejudice
Persuasion
Jane Eyre
A Tale of Two Cities
Gone With The Wind

I must admit I don’t like overly sentimental stories. I want to see a love story as part of the overall plot or where the plot wouldn’t make sense without the love element. I also want to see characters come to the romantic conclusion naturally and for them to make mistakes on the way. This is one reason why I think Pride and Prejudice is such a superb book.

There are love stories within other tales of course. I’ve always loved the love stories of Aragorn and Arwen and Faramir and Eowyn in The Lord of The Rings, though they’re not the main plot for that magnificent work.

I suppose I could say my biggest love story is my love for books and stories generally. That love is a permanent one!

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Fairytales and Pantomime

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Hope the last few days have been okay for you. Weather settling down a bit more. Busy week with the ACW Flash Fiction Group and a pantomime on my agenda this week but both were lots of fun – oh yes, they were! Lady has been playing with her two best buddies so she has had a lovely time and made more friends at my Slimming World group. I don’t normally take her with me for that but circumstances dictated I had to do this for this week and she loved being fussed over. I put a thank you post on our SW timeline and it had over 110 views! Think Lady has a new fan club…

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Am pleased to share Fairytales and Pantomime, my latest post for Chandler’s Ford Today. I look at why fairytales do make for wonderful pantomime material and why fairytales and pantomime help to keep each other relevant and in people’s memories. I think that matters.

I also look at why pantomime can encourage a life long love of theatre. Nothing to dislike there! Hope you enjoy the post. This is a lead in to my review of Sleeping Beauty performed by The Chameleon Theatre Group. Am looking forward to sharing that next week.

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Early post as am off to the pantomime tonight. Oh yes I am. No. There’s nothing behind me either! I am off to see The Chameleon Theatre Group perform Sleeping Beauty. Am expecting lots of laughs, excellent performances, and a great time to be had by all. Well, that is exactly what happened for all of their other pantomimes so am not expecting differently tonight!

I hope to review the show for Chandler’s Ford Today next week but my post tomorrow will look at why Fairytales and Pantomime are such a great match up. Looking forward to sharing that one. See above.

Don’t forget my author newsletter goes out again next week. I know, I know. January, for once, has flown by and we are almost into February. This time as well as sharing my news and useful tips, I am also sharing a pdf which I hope will prove useful to the writers amongst my subscribers. Plenty of time to sign up. If you wish to do so, please head over to my landing page at https://allisonsymescollectedworks.com

While on topic, I’d just like to say a big thank you for all who have signed up to my newsletter and a big hello and welcome to those who have signed up recently.

 

Hope you had a good day. Lady has. Got to play with her Hungarian Vizler and Rhodesian Ridgeback friends. Me? Housework and going to the dentists! Having said that, dentist is reasonably happy with me (!) and I am looking forward to the Association of Christian Writers Flash Fiction group meeting later on. Zoom is a blessing and the meetings are always great fun.

Will be looking at Fairytales and Pantomime for Chandler’s Ford Today – link up on Friday. See above. I explore why fairytales are brilliant stories to adapt for pantomime. Am going to see The Chameleon Theatre Group perform Sleeping Beauty on Thursday. Looking forward to that. Review to follow in due course.

Why do I love fairytales so much? Firstly, they are great stories. Secondly, the most unlikely characters often turn out to be the heroes and I have a very soft spot for that kind of thing. Thirdly, you just know the villains won’t get away with it (so unlike life, sadly). Fourthly, they were one of my first introductions to the wonderful world of stories as a whole. That alone is enough to make me love fairytales.

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Pleased to be back on Friday Flash Fiction with If Only, a tale which shows the consequences of the Fairy Queen banning magic from being used in baking. Hope you enjoy the story. Many thanks to all who have commented on this one already.
Screenshot 2024-01-26 at 09-44-55 If Only by Allison SymesAm currently working my way through the excellent competitions guide and handbook which came with the current edition of Writing Magazine. I’ve set a goal to enter more flash and short story competitions this year and am sure this guide will be an enormous help. This is where setting myself some deadlines (and using my diary to help me stick to them) will be useful.

Writing Tip: I know this one isn’t always possible, life has a habit of throwing curve balls etc, but I have found it so useful to block out times in which I will write. Again I use a diary to help me with this. Sometimes that time is a short slot. Today’s slot (Thursday 25th January slot) is as I’m off to the pantomime (oh yes I am!) after dinner tonight so I’ve got about ninety minutes in which to get some writing done.

Knowing this was coming up, I’ve worked out what I can do in that time slot and am doing it. It helps. When life does get in the way – as it does and will – whatever I scheduled for myself to do, I just “rebook” on another day. I find booking myself writing time helps me stick to it and I do get more written. It is worth a go.

It is fine if you can only book fifteen minutes here, half an hour there etc. Pockets of time mount up and I find the smaller slots ideal for drafting some flash pieces to finish off later. I then book myself a longer slot to do that finishing work.

420089602_816851383788058_2462316315740363443_nAs well as flash fiction, I write short stories and have just submitted one coming in at the 2000 words mark – for me, that’s a huge tale! This story was fun to write because I had the word count room to expand my characterisation in a way that suited the tale. I know it has added depth to the story.

But this also reminds me why I love flash so much. The impact of a flash piece can be tremendous precisely because there are not so many words to deliver that in. Flash fiction, for me, is like snapshots – one moment in time. A short story can be two snapshots put together if you like – you can have a couple of moments in time.

Both are wonderful fiction forms and I hope to write more of both in 2024 than I did last year. Onwards and upwards!

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Fairytales with Bite – Spanners in the Works

Troublesome characters are great fun to write and to read. They are the ones who throw the spanners in the works but it is not always for evil reasons. Sometimes they can see the lead character is heading off in the wrong direction so they may cause trouble to make that character face up to this and make the right choices instead.

Maybe causing trouble is the only way to make the lead character face reality. So give some thought to your troublesome characters. Why are they causing trouble? How do your other characters respond to it? Are your troublesome characters being troublesome just because they can or because they have good motives to do so?

A good example here is Gollum from The Lord of the Rings. He was troublesome to put it mildly. Even when he helped the hobbits, it was from mixed motives. Yet he did help them (even if on Mount Doom, he hadn’t intended to do so).

Troublesome characters can add a great deal of tension to your story but there should be good reasons (even if only from the character’s viewpoint) for them being that way. Gollum really thought he was right to want the precious back. Okay he was wrong but he thought he was right. And you can use that kind of thing to portray a character causing trouble because they honestly believe it is the right thing to do.

It is then up to you to work out whether that is the case or not and, especially where not, what your lead will do to overcome all those who cause trouble for them. After all, we wouldn’t want things to be too easy for our lead characters now, would we? The story is in overcoming the problems somehow.

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What problems do your characters face which are directly caused by your setting? Those problems can come from geography (dreadful terrain to have to journey across) to government dictatorship (not allowed to travel without a legal permit which would be a nuisance, to put it mildly, if your character has to go on a quest. Yes, they can ignore the requirement but at some point I would expect them to be challenged so they have to be prepared to deal with this somehow).

Think also about a character’s own problems. Do they have to overcome fears? Do they have to overcome family/friend objections? Are they going against what their society would expect them to do and, if so, what drives them to do this? There would have to be pressing reasons to do that. Nobody upsets the old apple cart without good cause.

Stories focus on problems and how characters overcome them. I find outlining my characters useful as I work out their traits and the negative/positive qualities coming from those. That will show me how well or otherwise said characters are likely to be at overcoming problems and often gives me good ideas for the problems I will make them face.

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Feedback, Local Theatre, and Reviews

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Busy week this time with a trip to the theatre and running a flash fiction group online coming up. Both will be fun though.

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Posting early today as have a meeting tonight. Will also post again early for the next few days. It is just one of those weeks but at least the sun came out today and Lady got to play with her friend, a smashing Aussie Shepherd. Both dogs had a fab time.

Writing Tip: Never worry about how much time you’ve got to write. Just get something down. I’ve talked about using pockets of time before but I have to do this a lot and it does pay off. I have had several blogs drafted, stories written etc doing this. It would’ve been too easy to have missed the chance to write those things down, yet alone then go on to do something positive with them.

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Lovely start to the day (and Lady got to show off her running skills to her older pal, the lovely Hungarian Vizler we know) and then by lunchtime it was pelting it down. One thing you can say about the weather in Britain – it is variable!

Have a busy week ahead with my visit to the theatre on Thursday and running the Flash Fiction group on Zoom for the Association of Christian Writers on Wednesday. Both will be great fun. (And I know I’ll get a review out of one of them and I suspect some draft flash fiction out of the other!).

Talking of reviews, remember these don’t have to be long and they are a great way of helping an author, so do bear that in mind. One from a review of Tripping the Flash Fantastic reads “Allison Symes can pack more into 100 words than most people can into 1000. Politicians take note!”

I wonder if I can make use of that given local elections are coming up soon!

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It’s St. George’s Day today (in England) and the birthday (also probable day of death too) for William Shakespeare. Have enjoyed watching several of his works thanks to National Theatre Live. Must try and get to see more.

Watching stories (stage or film) is another great way of taking in tales. My late mother would have been pleased about this. She tried to get me into the works of the Bard for many years. Would probably wonder why it took me so long! And the basic plots are often the basis for other stories – The Lion King is loosely based on Hamlet. His stories have inspired classical music too (The Love Theme for Romeo and Juliet being just one example).

Am off to local theatre later this week to see Spring Trio by The Chameleon Theatre Group.

Have never been tempted to act though I always admire those who do this well. It always has been the story I’ve been interested in. Doesn’t come as too much of a surprise that, does it?!

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Hope you are having a nice weekend. Off out for a lovely meal out later. Looking forward to that. Nice not having to cook!

I’ll be looking at How-To Guides (writing ones) for next week’s Chandler’s Ford Today post. I have used a few in my time and have found the ones I used (and still use) incredibly helpful. No one writer can know it all and a well written guide or two, developing networks of writer friends, and going to writing events are all invaluable for helping you learn your craft.

I use Scrivener for my writing and find both the inbuilt tutorial and the Scrivener for Dummies book by Gwen Hernandez to be great aids.

Link up for CFT post on Friday as usual.

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Many thanks for the great comments coming in on Going Home, my most recent tale on Friday Flash Fiction.

Feedback is much appreciated, especially for the short forms of writing. In the past where I was submitting something for a competition, if there was the opportunity to get feedback, I would take it. Usually there was a small additional fee (it is something towards the judge’s time) but I took the view it was worth it to get “soundings” back on my story. I always found this useful.

Sometimes I would then resubmit the story elsewhere and had it published then, having taken on board comments made. Didn’t always take the advice given – sometimes I had good reasons for disagreeing with it. But that was still useful. It made me work out why. And then there were those times when the commentator flagged up something so useful I wondered why I hadn’t spotted it in the first place! This is the way of these things.

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It’s Monday. It has been pouring down in my part of the world. It’s getting dark early due to the weather. It’s still Monday. Definitely time for a story then. Hope you enjoy my latest YouTube video – The Best. Not me being boastful (honest!) but see if you would do what my character does here faced with what she is facing.

One of the joys of going to things like The Writers’ Summer School, Swanwick, is getting to explore their wonderful Book Room! I’ve come back with flash collections and other books to enjoy many a time.

Don’t forget if you would like signed copies of either From Light to Dark and Back Again or Tripping the Flash Fantastic, please contact me and I will happily oblige! Payment is via bank transfer. Please contact me via the form on my website –https://allisonsymescollectedworks.com/contact/.

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I was chatting about flash fiction and its benefits as part of an ACW meeting this morning. Always good to spread the word about the benefits of flash, no matter what else you write. I know it has brought on my editing skills a lot!

Sunday afternoons is often when I write a lot of flash. Always look forward to that. (I end up doing other bits and pieces on flash during the week whether I’m writing about it for blog posts or preparing for future books etc).

Above all, flash led me to having my own books published so will always love it for that alone!

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All authors would like reviews, ideally good ones of course. What I like about reviews I read is when they give me information and a sense of what a book is about without giving away too much of it. These are the kind of reviews I try to write as well.

Other than buying a writer’s book, giving them an honest review is the second best thing you can do to help the authors in your life. We can share the fact we have had reviews in (which encourages people to take a look at those and hopefully our books too). It gives us a much needed morale boost. Bear in mind we are at our desks alone for a lot of the time. It is also a form of validation and most writers appreciate getting that every now and again.

So if you’ve read books you love, do review them. Reviews don’t have to be long. They don’t take much time to do and they really do help writers. And where better than to spread the word about the usefulness of well thought out reviews than at Goodreads?

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Using Time for Fiction

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Hope you have had a good week. Not bad here though the weather was mixed. Think winter is trying to hang on when it really should just go away now. I have a look at friendships, crossing divides, and whether flash fiction can bear having repetition in it amongst other topics this time.

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Delighted to share my latest post for Chandler’s Ford Today which is on a topic which is close to my heart – Using Time For Fiction. I like to make the most of those odd pockets of time we all get and it can be amazing what writing you can do in these. See the post for tips and thoughts here which I hope you will find useful.

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Better day. Got to have some sunshine today and Lady got to “show off” playing with her ball in front of her pal, the one she treats almost like a mum, the lovely Hungarian Vizler.

Am off for a day or two tomorrow. Will be posting as usual but times may vary. A lot will depend on where I am and the quality of a Wifi signal. It can be variable indeed on trains!

Sharing Using Time for Fiction on Chandler’s Ford Today tomorrow. See above. As ever I plan to use what time I can on my journey to do what writing I can using my trusted phone and Evernote. Am never short of things to do here. Am never bored. The journey flies by and I end up going home with a lot drafted ready to be edited later. There is nothing about that scenario I dislike!

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Another mixed bag, weather wise, here, but Lady got to play with her Rhodesian Ridgeback best friend today. Both dogs went home tired and happy.

Am talking about Using Time For Fiction for Chandler’s Ford Today on Friday. See above. Looking forward to sharing that.

Hope to be taking part in an author event in July. More news on that nearer the time. Am giving a flash fiction workshop for a writing group in May. Looking forward to that a lot. Always happy to talk about flash fiction!

Looking forward to the Association of Christian Writers Flash Fiction Group meeting on Zoom at the end of the month. I set some prompts last time and one of these was the first line of my story, Untaken, which was up on CafeLit yesterday. So I do write up my own prompts too!

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It’s the end of another working week (a shorter one in the UK given we had a Bank Holiday on Monday for the Easter weekend). Still time for a story. Hope you like my latest on Friday Flash Fiction – Making Her Day. See what does here!

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Does writing flash regularly make writing to a specific word count easier? Hmm… jury’s out there. What I find is it is a case you know you can do it. You’ve done it lots of times before. But you still have to face this blank page. I go by the Wodehouse maxim to apply the seat of the pants to the seat of the chair.

I will often refer to my notebooks (and this is where an idea from there will grab me and I run with that). Using pockets of time just to jot down potential ideas is never wasted effort and it pays off for me a lot.

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Is there a place for repetition in flash fiction? It may sound ironic, given the limited word count, but yes there is. I’ve used a repetition of a phrase for a character to stress something. They are trying to convince you they are speaking the truth. Sometimes this kind of repetition can be a habit of the character. So there is a place for it but it must be something you’ve thought out and can back up the characterisation to limit the risk of it looking like a mistake.

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Fairytales With Bite – Friendships

What kind of friendships are encouraged in your fictional settings? One of my favourites is the friendship which develops between Legolas and Gimli from The Lord of the Rings. So many funny moments when they’re fighting side by side too. (‘It still counts as one, elf’, just being one example. This was an aspect I thought the films brought out so well).

And you can’t beat the friendship between Frodo and Sam for loyalty and courage. But the latter friendship is more understandable – between two hobbits rather than between an elf and a dwarf, traditional enemies.

Does your world discourage/encourage friendships between different species? Where would friendships be forbidden outright and does anyone defy this? How do your characters meet and develop friendships (or enmity come to that given friendships can go sour)?

You can show so much about a character by the type of friends they seek out (or seek to have because it serves their career etc – that in itself tells readers a lot about them!). Also what kind of a friend is your character to others? That can also reveal a great deal about the type of person they are.

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This World and Others – Crossing Divides

Following on from Fairytales with Bite, friendships can be a great way to cross divides. The Legolas/Gimil example is a great one here. Who would be brave enough in your setting to make the first move here?

What divides does your world have and how did these come into being? Does anyone ever challenge them? Are there any good reasons for a divide? (An aggressive country attacks another. They’re beaten back. The victim country puts up a wall to stop this happening again – that kind of thing).

Where you have a divide, you have characters caught on either side of it. There is an obvious potential for tragic stories here but could you bring out a funny side at all? Do you have the spiv type characters who use the divides to their advantage and manage to cheat the system?

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