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Flash NANO Update and Using Colour/Senses

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The Remembrance weekend was so moving, as always. Some things should never be forgotten. Writing wise, you could work out what your characters would consider they HAVE to remember and why. Even if you don’t use it in the story itself, it will give you a clearer insight as to what motivates and drives them, what they would do, what they would never do etc. That information is bound to help you with your characterisation.

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Have been enjoying listening off and on today to the historic snippets from the last 75 years and classical music to go with them on Classic FM to celebrate HM The King’s 75th birthday (on 14th November 2023). Nice idea. The snippets have brought back many memories for me from the 1970s onwards, one of which was there being snow in the summer of 1975. Yes, remember that, and the drought the following year. They appointed a Minister for Drought as that wore on. Within days, the heavens opened. There’s a lesson there somewhere.

The Flash NANO challenge yesterday was the first where I’ve needed to go to the full word count for flash – 1000 words. The prompt involved a partial scene already laid out and it was a “what happened next” prompt. Bear in mind you could create a character and use the what happened next idea to create a story for him/her/it (I have occasionally had characters as “its” for good reasons).

Also bear in mind classic story ideas can and have come from the simple questions of Who? What? When? How? Why? and Where? (also known as Kipling’s serving men I believe). I like to add in What If? to that little lot. You’ve got yourself an outline right there. Now fill in the gaps! I love this kind of thing. It’s a fantastic way to trigger writing ideas (and talking of which that will be the very topic I’ll be writing about for Chandler’s Ford Today on Friday).

Also to the good folk at the Medway Mermaids for making me so welcome last night at our Zoom meeting, thank you! I hope you find the editing thoughts and tips useful.

Also ask what if and does the reader need to know thisHope you have had a good Monday. Lady did – got to play with her two best buddies and the rain had stopped so that counts as a win.

Am looking forward to running an editing workshop for the Medway Mermaids later this evening on Zoom. (If I mention the word zoom to Lady, she’ll immediately assume she is up for the zoomies with her Rhodesian Ridgeback friend!). I look at editing from the viewpoint of an author, an editor, and competition judge as I am all three. I’ve learned so much from being all three.

Am enjoying the Flash NANO challenges so far. Might have to do today’s one tomorrow but you can always play catch up with these things. I found that handy last year. Word count is varying so far from 100 to just under 400, my natural flash “home”. Am not surprised by this. Found the same was the case last year.

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12th November 2023 – Remembrance Sunday

As ever it was a moving service where my family and I go. The village including the two churches gathers around the War Memorial. The poppy wreaths cover the steps. The colour stands out especially on a dull day.

On to writing, using colour or any of the senses sensibly can help readers picture your scenes better. It gives them a hook if you like. So if you are describing anything or getting your character to observe something, add in some colour or use a sense which seems most apt to them and your story.

I must admit that colour and sound are the two things I pick up on when noticing anything. Sometimes the lack of colour/sound/anything you would normally expect to find can be used to good effect, especially for horror tales.

On a lighter note, am so looking forward to meeting the Medway Mermaids on Zoom again for an editing workshop. Always fun to do these. And it was great fun too. Always pleased to spread the word about the joys of editing and there are joys to it, honestly!

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Hope you have had a good day. Glad it stayed dry for the Two Minutes Silence today. Would like dry weather again for Remembrance Sunday.

Will be discussing Triggering Writing Ideas for Chandler’s Ford Today next week. As I am always writing flash fiction and blog posts etc., I am always keen to trigger ideas whichever way I can. I have several ways of triggering ideas and use them all regularly. I’ll be sharing some of the ways I use in this post next Friday.

Tomorrow is one of the days when I get a lot of flash fiction written and/or edited. It’s a lovely way to spend Sunday afternoons – in the warm, writing in the format I love most and with a decent mug of something nice (hot chocolate if it is cold, fruit tea if not) alongside me.

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I enjoy creating story videos for my YouTube channel. I see it as part of my marketing and it proves my point, I think, that marketing can be creative and fun. I write the story and then create the video in Book Brush before uploading it to YouTube. Is also easy to share on social media. New subscribers to my channel are always welcome though. Do see the relevant link here.

 

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It’s Monday. It’s been a tiring day. It’s dark far too early. And it’s Monday. Time for a story then. My latest on YouTube is Waiting To Write. Hope you enjoy finding out what my character, Tracy, does about poison pen letters.

12th November – Remembrance Sunday

Today is Remembrance Sunday. It is a day full of memories, rightly so too. I’ve long been a fan of the classic TV series, Dad’s Army, which is still shown regularly, gets good ratings, and is full of humour and often pathos. If there are two TV series to watch at this time of year, that is one of them. The other is Blackadder Goes Forth, especially the last episode, Goodbyeee.

Words have such an impact and perhaps we are more conscious of this on days like today. It is where we recall the writings of the war poets, the hymn writers like Isaac Watts, and so on.

Whether you write to entertain, to share a “message” without preaching, or do both, I hope you get much joy from your writing. Words matter. Stories matter. Stories can convey things long after the original storytellers have gone on. So write, enjoy what you write, and hopefully others will too.

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Just to say there’s a good offer on From Light to Dark and Back Again on Amazon at the moment. See link for details.

Am slowly getting a Christmas list together and there will be books on it. That won’t come as a surprise, I’m sure.

Yesterday’s Flash NANO challenge one was an interesting one and not of a kind I’ve come across before. You write ten sentences to make a story. You then change the order of those sentences to make another one. Great fun and the perspective of the story can change depending on your ordering. That I am sure is something which could be exploited to good effect by someone and I may well try this one again myself at some point.

Will be cracking on with today’s challenge later.


Goodreads Author Blog – Annuals

I’ve always loved annuals. They make smashing Christmas presents. I’ve enjoyed The Beano, The Bash Street Kids, and others in my time. These days and in a completely different mood, I love The Friendship Book. It’s a gentle, often amusing, and thoughtful read and a great comfort book. Other family members get the Private Eye annual. I know I turn to the cartoons first there when I get to look at it!

Annuals, I think, serve a great purpose in encouraging further reading. They are perfect for dipping into when you know you want to read something but don’t want anything “heavy”. I will add flash fiction and short story collections are also great for that but hands up, I am bound to say that, given I am published in both! It is still true though!

Which annuals do you enjoy?

D.C.Thomson, that wonderful publisher based in Dundee, are responsible for many of them.

Long may they continue.

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Windsor Castle and Cake Glorious Cake

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Had a lovely day out with my younger sister over the weekend. It was a trip down Memory Lane in some ways. While we’d not been to the Castle itself before, we have been to Legoland and, prior to that on that site, the old Windsor Safari Park. (That was very much of its time). In both cases we remembered the magnificent views of the Castle from those places. This time, it was nice to see the views FROM the Castle!

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Posting early as have a busy evening ahead. Have another one again tomorrow with the Association of Christian Writers’ Flash Fiction group meeting on Zoom. Talking about flash fiction is always fun and it has been great to see people with this group have works published on Friday Flash Fiction etc. The proof of the pudding etc etc. Writing exercises (and I set these regularly) do spur creativity and are worth having a go at for that reason alone. If you can then go on to get the works published, even better.

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Today would’ve been my father’s 86th birthday. He would have heartily approved of my kid sister and I having a trip to Windsor Castle over the weekend. The last time we were in the area at all, we were kids and he was driving. Yes, I am going a long way back. I have a long way TO go back!

Lady had a good time with her two closest pals, the Rhodesian Ridgeback and the Hungarian Vizler. It has been cooler today – nobody in my acquaintance, human or otherwise, has been sorry about that!

Looking forward to welcoming Gail Aldwin back to Chandler’s Ford Today on Friday. (Many thanks again to Francesca Tyer for her two part interview – it was great).

Have submitted a short historical piece as an entry for an article competition. So enjoyed writing the piece too. Am pondering whether to have a crack at a flash fiction competition – deadline end August.

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Another hot day (though cooler than yesterday). Lady and I are not sorry about that.
Many thanks for the great comments coming in on Deserved Desserts, my most recent tale on Friday Flash Fiction. The opening line here is an odd one even by my standards but huge fun! Hope you enjoy it if you missed the link on my book Facebook page on Friday (From Light to Dark and Back Again).

Sometimes I will start an idea from a quirky opening line I’ve jotted down (usually during one of my brainstorming sessions). I then work out what I could do with that line and I usually find something. Don’t forget you can use random generators to come up with opening lines (quirky or otherwise). This makes for a good writing challenge. There are competitions which are based on opening lines set by the competition organisers so this is well worth having a go at on a regular basis.

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Had a fabulous day out at Windsor Castle with my kid sister. Lovely time had by us both. So hot though. What is nice is we’ve been able to convert our tickets so we can visit again during the next year during the times the Castle is open to the public. We hope to get to do that. No extra money for this either. Also very impressed with how well organised they are for those with mobility issues.

Looking forward to sharing a fabulous interview with Gail Aldwin whose The Secret Life of Carolyn Russell is out soon. Link up on Friday. And then I’ll be sharing more news about the Book Fair I’m going to be part of in July.

I’ve occasionally written a flash piece based on a work of art. Gill James set this as a challenge ages ago and it was fun to do. Will I do it again? At some point, yes. I was impressed with the Van Dycks and other masterpieces I’ve seen today at the Castle so plenty of inspiration to be found there! Am not short of potential material at least…

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I mix up the pieces I use for reading at Open Prose Mic Nights etc – in terms of mood, word count as well as by using different tales. I rehearse reading these (and yes I do often record them on Zoom to play back) but the important thing is to have a good read through (ideally several) as it is too easy to assume you know the material, you can wing it. Err… no.

What I do find the rehearsals do is help calm my nerves because I know I have rehearsed. It helps. The tricky bit is working out how much to drink (non-alcoholic as alcohol can dry the throat aside from any other side effects!) ahead of an event because you don’t want to have a dry throat when reading (it can lead to coughing) nor do you want to be caught short! I find about an hour before hand works well.

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It’s Monday. It has cooled down a bit! Still time for a new story. Hope you enjoy my latest on YouTube – Cake Glorious Cake. Is on the dark side, probably like the chocolate involved in the cake. Hope you enjoy it.

 

Internal thoughts are a great way to show character attitude (and usual practice is to have these in italics. It distinguishes them from “speech” and flags up the the reader this is a character thinking). I use this a lot as I often want to get across attitude and don’t we all think things we don’t then go on to say? Characters can do the same thing! What the thoughts will do is influence their behaviour and show the reader directly why your character is acting the way they are, both useful things.

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Looking forward to running the Association of Christian Writers Flash Fiction group meeting on Zoom next week. Always good fun and it is an enjoyable challenge for me to find a useful topic to set exercises on. I like setting (and then doing) writing exercises. I’ve had several stories go on to be published which started life this way.

Now I must admit I find the hot humid weather not the easiest of conditions to cope with but it led me to wonder if you could get a character to find the same thing. How would that change their attitudes and behaviour? How would that change the course of your story? And are other characters tolerant of their struggles to cope with the conditions?

Goodreads Author Blog – Classic -v- Contemporary Reading

Now for me there is no debate when it comes to whether you should read classic or contemporary works of fiction and non-fiction. You do both of course. For non-fiction you need to be aware some information is likely to be out of date but there is still inspiration to be had from what people thought at the time of publication. That could even lead to fictional story ideas.

I often mix up my reading so I’ll read a novel, before going on to a story or flash collection and then I’ll move on to some non-fiction but it is a good idea to mix up between classic and contemporary as well. You don’t want to miss out on the classic works and you want to see what is out and about now. I see this as having a good reading diet (which I find helps inspire my writing too).

It’s also encouraging to know great writers have always been inspired by others’ stories. So I should be too! But it is interesting that ideas for stories often come when I’m reading non-fiction. And I can be as taken away by fabulous tale whether it is a classic or contemporary one.

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Roses, Zebras, and Sherlock Holmes

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Special Note:  Before you ask, I haven’t chosen the post’s title using a random generator, honestly! These are all things which have either occurred in my writing life so far this week or are going to before the next post comes out on Friday. Yes, an interesting week! Mind you, if there is a prize for unusual blog post titles, I think this one is in with a shout…

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I’m looking forward to chatting again with author Ruth Leigh whose The Continued Times of Isabella M Smugge came out on 22nd October. In this week’s Chandler’s Ford Today post, Ruth and I will be looking at marketing and the characters Ruth loves and loathes amongst other topics. Link up on Friday.

And talking of marketing, may I say a huge thanks for the views on my latest YouTube story, The Zebra Who Lost Its Stripes. It clearly struck a chord!

This story started life as a title idea which came from the Association of Christian Writers Flash Fiction Group meeting I ran last week. I’ve mentioned before about brainstorming titles for writing up into stories later. It means when you have longer at your desk you’ve got something to work on immediately. I do practice what I preach here!


Weather far better today than yesterday but it wasn’t a difficult bar to cross! Lady got to see her best mates today, the lovely Ridgeback and Vizler, so all three dogs well pleased with that.

The Ridgeback’s owner and I were given a bunch of roses on the regular walk back by someone who has these donated as part of a charity collection but this time they had far too many flowers to be able to use so were giving bunches away to people who were walking down their street! We met someone else coming the other way who was also carrying a lovely bunch of roses and who, like us, was smiling broadly at the thought of them!

There is a flash fiction tale in there somewhere, I swear! Talking of which, I chose two of the titles I came up with from last week’s ACW Flash Fiction Group session and written the stories up. I’ll be sharing one of these over on my book page shortly as it is my new YouTube tale. Good fun to do.

And I will be setting the challenge soon for the December issue of Mom’s Favorite Reads. Meanwhile, why not check out the latest fab issue? See link below.


That storm overnight/earlier this morning was quite something. Am so grateful Lady isn’t frightened of thunder and lightning. (She gets annoyed by the louder fireworks rather than becomes frightened of them – again am thankful for that). Week ahead is looking a bit grim – not just weather wise, unfortunately.

I must admit I find writing both a joy to do and therapeutic. There is just something about putting yourself in your character’s shoes and working out how they would act/react that takes me out of myself for a while – and especially with the news being so grim, I find that incredibly helpful.

Many thanks also for the comments coming in on Hope, my latest on Friday Flash Fiction. If you missed it, see the link.

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Hope today has been okay. Got soaked in two minutes rushing to bring washing in earlier. Hello, autumn, my old friend!

It was fantastic chatting to Ruth Leigh on Chandler’s Ford Today yesterday. Part 2 of her interview will be up next week and we’ll be looking at marketing as part of that. Link up on Friday.

I’m off to The Chameleon Theatre Group next week as well to see their latest production – Sherlock Holmes and The Mystery at Mallen Hall. Sounds fun. Will review in due course. Am looking forward to meeting up with Janet Williams, my lovely CFT editor for this too. Seems like ages since the last “CFT works outing”!

Did I get any ideas from the ACW Flash Fiction Group meeting on Wednesday? Yes and not yet. I’ve got some ideas for titles I’d like to work up into stories and hope to do that soon. Am pressing on with my third book collection as I am nearly there with that and I do want to get that submitted this autumn. And, yes, these things always do take longer than you initially think!

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I mentioned over on my main author page tonight I was delighted to see such a great response to my The Zebra Who Lost Its Stripes story. Am glad you enjoyed it. Brainstorming title ideas for writing up later pays off!

I usually put up a new video on my YouTube channel once a week, unless away or ill, and I got into doing this as I wanted another way to share flash stories.

The idea of doing something visual with them appealed and hence I went to YouTube. I use Book Brush to help me create the videos. All good fun and of course it forms part of my overall marketing as well. New subscribers are always welcome to my channel and you can find this at the link below.

Short videos are easier to share and of course flash is a great form to link into that.

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My latest YouTube flash tale comes from a title I came up with for the Association of Christian Writers’ Flash Fiction Group meeting last week. Hope you enjoy The Zebra Who Lost Its Stripes. Given this has had an amazing reaction (see screenshot above, I was pleasantly stunned!), I make no apology for sharing it twice here! Am so glad it went down well. This is probably the nearest to a children’s story I get.

 

I was talking about titles with the Association of Christian Writers Flash Fiction Group on Wednesday. What you want is something that lures your reader in – to give them an intriguing premise they have to read the story to find out what happens. I will often brainstorm title ideas when I have small pockets of time and I want to write something.

The joy of this is it gives me something to look through and work up into stories later on when I have more time. I will also brainstorm titles for use for non-fiction topics for my blog on Chandler’s Ford Today, my spots on Authors Electric, More than Writers, and Mom’s Favorite Reads.

Titles are your first advert in many ways and I find I have to have one to get myself started on a piece, fiction or otherwise. It can change – and often does given when I’m drafting something other ideas for titles often pop up. I just make a note of these and compare them with my original thought and then go with the one I like best. Sometimes it does mean sticking with the original but at least I then know it is the best one to use for that piece.

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For my flash pieces, I’m looking for a strong central character to “carry” the plot. In some ways here writing can be a bit like acting. You need the right cast to make it work. This is why I need to know my character really well to make sure they’re up to the work!

I interview my characters. I look for traits and what can come from those (including the flip side to them, there always is a flip side). I also like to know something of their tastes (knowing what their sense of humour is can give good indications of their character type funnily enough. Do they like quirky humour? Are they a bit strait-laced etc?).

Often outlining a character throws up ideas for the stories they would work well in so this, for me, is another reason to outline.

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Goodreads Author Blog – The ABC of Books Part 1 – A to M

A = Annuals, often treasured for years. Which was your favourite?

B = Back catalogues – I often don’t pick the first book by an author to read so if I like the book I did read, I have a lot of fun catching up with the others!

C = Characters – where would any book be without them and again name your favourites. I have loads.

D = Dialogue in books mirrors real life speech but can’t ape it exactly as there’d be far too many ahs, ums, stutters etc – not easy and boring to read!

E = Entertainment and enrichment – what good books always do whether they’re fiction or non-fiction.

F = Flash fiction – my genre – fun and stretches across genres too as I’ve written crime flash, ghost flash etc.

G = Great writers of the past still inspire today though I am thankful I don’t need to be as descriptive as Dickens had to be for his readers who could not travel to see the places he wrote about (or have the benefit of film/TV to see them).

H = History – fiction and non- fiction – a wonderful category and can inspire all sorts of fictional works.

I = Intellect and Imagination – reading widely doses so much for both of these.

J = Justice – a major factor in the popularity of crime fiction as justice is usually seen to be done here.

K = Kindle – ebooks have transformed reading by giving us another format. It has also given more writers a voice too.

L = Life – in all its forms and several alien ones – can be found across the whole spectrum of book categories.

M = Mysteries – as well as the obvious crime section, there is the paranormal mystery book, the non-fiction books trying to lift the lid on mysteries and so on.

Part 2 next week but I do know books should be celebrated!

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