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Hope you have had a good weekend. Weather still a mixture of torrential rain, sunshine, cloud, and high winds. More to come too. I am so thankful that writing is something which is usually done indoors in the warm!

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Next author newsletter due out tomorrow but there’s still time to sign up. Please head over to my landing page at https://allisonsymescollectedworks.com for tips, news, story links etc.

Also due tomorrow is the start of Flash NANO where I’ll receive 30 flash fiction prompts for the whole of November. I took part for the first time last year and had a wonderful time with this. I am looking forward to more of the same! It’s a fabulous way to get some drafting done.

I think that’s the secret, if you can call it that, to this and NaNoWriMo (National Novel Writing Month). See these as ways to get first drafts done. Editing can come in later. But getting those stories down is vital and these ideas can help you get off to a cracking start. You can’t edit a blank page now, can you?

Hope you have had a good day. Lady got to show off in front of her Hungarian Vizler pal, who she treats like a mother figure (and the Vizler loves it too, she loves being “boss dog” here). Managed to avoid most of the rain. Always see that as a bonus. Lady and I don’t always manage it so see it as a win when we do.

How do your characters react to the weather? Equally how does the weather affect the story? It is often used to make life more difficult for the characters (see The Lord of the Rings for more on this!) but could you use it to help your characters instead?

For example, bright sunshine will make any journey more pleasant for most of your characters but if they’re facing threats from vampires, guess who the sunshine isn’t going to help!

Perspective is an issue here too. What some characters see as helpful, others won’t though it can be interesting to explore why the latter take a negative attitude as that may well have a bearing on how well or otherwise they “do” in the story. Outcomes could change too.

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Am pleased to be back on More than Writers with my post Moments in Stories. I look at some of the memorable moments in fiction I love but also discuss whether, as a writer, you can know what these are for your stories before you’ve gone through at least one edit. I also ask why do you care about your characters enough to write their stories up at all. Hope you enjoy the post

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Hope you have had a good day. Very changeable weather today. Still the rain did make me get round to one job I often put off doing – the ritual tidying up of the desk!

Will be looking at Stories Based On Other Stories for Chandler’s Ford Today next week. Looking forward to sharing that. I love stories full stop. I have even more love for a story which is based on or inspired by another, stays true to the character/setting portrayal of the original or is upfront enough to say it is Tale X based in the Year ZZZ, but is its own tale too.

Not an easy balance to get right but it can be done. So many tales have been inspired by Pride and Prejudice, for example. Not all are set in the Regency period. Must admit though I don’t like the zombie cross one though. That just seems wrong to me. I dread to think what Jane Austen would have made of that.

Author newsletter due out again next week. I compile this during the month as news and story links come in and is great fun to put it together. I had hesitated about having one but am now glad I have gone ahead. I think it is vital to enjoy what marketing you do here. It is that enjoyment which will help keep you going.

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Hope you have had a good day. I don’t “do” Halloween (much prefer All Souls’ Day) but I have written the odd ghost story in flash fiction. Like any other character, I give good thought to the motivation behind a ghost turning up. There has to be a good reason for it.

In Tripping the Flash Fantastic, in my story Getting It Right, I write from the viewpoint of the recently murdered Richard III who is lamenting how he has been misrepresented. It gave him a chance to have his say to a modern audience! That was my motivation there.

For almost all of my historical pieces, I “allow” my characters to speak in relatively modern English so they can make themselves understood to us in the present day. Olde worlde English can be tiresome to read in huge quantities. As with accents, slang etc, a little goes a long way and I have always felt the most important thing is to get the character and their situation across in a way readers will want to follow. So the use of modern English is my one conceit here.

I have written from the viewpoint of Anne Boleyn too and it was, again, much more important to get her as my character to show you how she is feeling on the eve of her execution and to hopefully encourage sympathy for her and her plight. The Tudor English would get in the way of that, I think.

Allison Symes - Book Collection and TTFFIt’s Monday. The clocks have gone back in the UK. It’s darker earlier. There has been more heavy rain. It’s Monday. You know where I’m going with this – it’s definitely time for a story.

Hope you enjoy Numbers, my latest on YouTube, and see how my postie characters deals with the stuck up folk in Wisteria Crescent.

Many thanks for the comments coming in on Musical Neighbours, my latest tale on Friday Flash Fiction. If you missed it, you can check it out at the link below. I love coming up with the 100-word stories (aka drabbles) for FFF. Great fun to do. And do check out the website for great reads. (My problem here is tearing myself away from the stories but that’s a good problem to have!).

Am looking forward to Flash NANO which starts on 1st November. Had a great time with this last year and out of the 30 prompts, I was able to get stories I was happy with out of most of them which is fair enough. Not every prompt will suit every writer but I had a great time responding to the challenge.

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A huge thank you for the wonderful comments coming in on my news about Gifted, the latest Bridge House Publishing anthology. Much appreciated. Am so looking forward to the BHP celebration event in December.

One of the things I love about writing flash stories is I can give the characters who deserve it their well earned comeuppance quickly! I tell you writing can be so therapeutic at times – for the author at least! But whatever kind of flash tale I write, I do have to know my character well enough to know they are going to deserve to have me drop them right in it. Then it is great fun delivering on that!

Flash works so well for twist stories and humour too. My ideal story is a flash one where a character gets their comeuppance and it is a funny one. Love reading that kind of tale too. Probably says a lot about me but one of the joys of fiction is in knowing that a lot of the time justice is done (especially in crime stories) when in life it sometimes isn’t.

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I’ve had the lovely news this week that another story of mine is out in the latest anthology by Bridge House Publishing called Gifted. My story in there is called Desperately Seeking Talent. I often submit work for anthologies and it has been a great joy many of my stories have appeared in these over the years.

But I love reading anthologies and collections as well as contributing to them. I love discovering the different styles of the writers. I was one of the winners of the Waterloo Arts Festival Writing Competition where the writers had to write to 1000 words all on the same theme. Fifteen different writers came up with fifteen varying stories and it was amazing to see the creativity here and a joy to be part of it.

Reading anthologies and collections is also a great way to discover writers new to you. Why not use what you like about their short form work to check out their longer stories and books?

I see books like this as “mixed assortments” of stories. What is there not to like about that? I also read these books in between novels as I like to mix up reading the long form with the short form. There is so much to enjoy about both kinds of writing and I want to make sure I get plenty of reading done in both forms.

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Scene Setting and Publication News

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Hope you have had a good week. Weather changeable. Bright sunshine followed by torrential rain. Hope you are keeping as safe and dry as possible. My sympathies to all who are dealing with flooding. Lady has had a great week. Has seen her best friends all week. So she and they would see it as a very good week. And I finish the week with publication news – see below for more.

Pleased to be in print again with the latest Bridge House Publishing anthology

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Pleased to share Scene Setting for Chandler’s Ford Today this week. I share various ways in which scene setting can be done, including the use of dialogue and locations, all of which I use regularly. Hope you find the post useful.

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There are a few delightful tasks to carry out when I have a story out in an anthology. I’ve asked Amazon to add Gifted (Bridge House Publishing) to my Author Central page. I’ve added the book to my ALCS listing (Authors Licensing and Collecting Society). I’ve also added it to my books page on my website. See link below. I have my books page as my home page by the way.

That is after I’ve ordered my copies from my publisher of course! This is delightful admin to do. Naturally once the books are in with me, I will say so here and I would be delighted to sell them directly. Equally you can go through The Bridgetown Cafe Bookshop link I shared yesterday. See below.

Now to look forward to the Bridge House Publishing celebration event in December!

In the meantime, tomorrow for Chandler’s Ford Today, I will be discussing Scene Setting. See above!

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Publication News: Am thrilled to announce my short story, Desperately Seeking Talent, is now out in the Bridge House Publishing anthology, Gifted. Many congratulations to all of the writers in this new collection. It is great to see familiar names in here and names who are new to me. BHP is a great believer in encouraging writers.

Will be putting my order in for my copies very soon. Meantime you can get Gifted, which naturally would make an ideal gift for someone, from The Bridgetown Cafe Bookshop. See link and picture above. You have the option to buy from the publishers directly and from Amazon. One is bound to suit!

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Pleased to share Musical Neighbours, my latest tale on Friday Flash Fiction. I hope this one will make you smile. My characters here can at least be grateful their new neighbour didn’t take up the violin but find out here what they did do instead.

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Hope you have had a good day. Lady got to see her best buddy, the Rhodesian Ridgeback, unexpectedly this afternoon to the delight of both dogs. Nice afternoon spent sorting out some admin for Gifted, the latest Bridge House Publishing anthology. My story, Desperately Seeking Talent, is in there. One lovely thing here is the buzz of being published never fades. I just wish I could bottle that feeling!

I’ve sometimes used well known phrases as the title for the story and its underlying theme. One of these is A Stitch In Time (Tripping the Flash Fantastic). I even use the phrase in my opening line as the lead in to what my character is up to. Good fun doing that.

Usually I will use a proverb or well known phrase for one thing only and it is usually either the title or the theme. But it can work doing both in the same story as long as the character and storyline is strong enough.

396718551_759611992845331_5379539281637291755_nDelighted to be in print again with Desperately Seeking Talent which is part of the Bridge House Publishing anthology, Gifted. The thrill of being published never goes away and many congratulations to the other authors in here with me. Good to have your company! Very nice to spot familiar names and new ones in this anthology.

Am running the Flash Fiction group meeting for the Association of Christian Writers this evening. Always great fun and we’ll be having a look at marketing flash fiction this time. You can say at least today I am definitely practicing what I preach!

And it won’t be long before I’m taking part in Flash NANO once again. One prompt a day for the thirty days of November. Loved it last year. Sure I will again this time!

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Fairytales with Bite – Traffic Rules for the In-Flight Magical Being

It can be chaotic on the roads at the best of time but when you’re in a magical world, you have to worry about what’s happening in the skies as well. So some basic traffic rules for the in-flight magical being include:-

  1. Courtesy is a life saver. Give way. Don’t hog the middle cloud.
  2. Get out of the way of other fliers if they are faster than you.
  3. Keep your broomstick emissions as clean as possible. Nobody wants to breathe in the smell of burning broomstick up there. And if you’ve got a burning broomstick, you shouldn’t be flying. If you are, you won’t be for long.
  4. Do not park on a convenient cloud for in-flight meals and entertainment. You will get in the way of other fliers doing that. You eat, drink, watch a film etc when you’ve landed safely and not before.
  5. If you are flying on other worlds, look out for their aircraft, birds etc. Don’t get in their way either. There are birds of prey big enough to deal with irritant tiny fairies on the wing. They may well see you as a tasty in-flight snack. As for aircraft, there is a good chance you will be killed and cremated at the same time by these things so stay clear.
  6. Also the other danger of flying on other worlds is drawing attention to your existence (and that of your world). Not a great idea. It would be best to use the transport methods available to the residents and blend in instead.
  7. No littering just because you can from a broom and think nobody will spot you.
  8. Should you come across traffic lights etc., some realms will have them, obey them. Again it is a question of not drawing attention to yourself. In a magical world they will be able to have traffic lights anywhere so again obey these.
  9. Again don’t draw attention to the fact you’re a stranger in town. That is rarely a great idea.
  10. When you land, park your flying vehicle considerately.

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This World and Others – Getting Around

Following on from Fairytales with Bite, all worlds need some sort of transport system. Your characters will need to get around so how can they do this? Is the better kind of transport limited to the wealthier characters or can anyone fly, for example?

What issues does your setting’s transport system have to deal with regularly? Does climate/weather have an impact here or has your setting found a way of ensuring it cannot do that by having some sort of shield around it?

Do your characters like travelling or see it as a necessary evil? If fuel is needed, what kind is used and what problems does it cause your setting? I like the idea of a totally green fuel source. Has your setting found one? How have they made it work?

Plenty of story ideas here. Also, humorously, what would traffic hold ups look like in your world? Is magic used to settle scores here? What are the results? There could be funny tales here.

Are your transport systems available to all

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