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The Point of Fiction

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Glad to say it has cooled down a bit since last week. Lady isn’t sorry about that either. Pleased to say I’m running a flash fiction workshop again on Saturday courtesy of Zoom. Looking forward to that.

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Lady got to show off in front of her Hungarian Vizler friend today. The latter doesn’t mind. Lady loves it of course. It is a bit like showing off to Mum given the Vizler is older than Lady. But both went home feeling all had been put right with their worlds at least!

There is an Amazon offer on From Light to Dark and Back Again at the moment. See the link for more details.

I was pleasantly surprised to discover recently my short stories have appeared in almost 20 different anthologies (and when the Bridge House Publishing anthology comes out later this year it will be 20!). Yes, they are on my ALCS listing. I add new books to which I’ve contributed to this listing as soon as I can. It’s easy to do and it helps boost the money I receive from ALCS every March. Win-win there and if you are a published writer not on the ALCS system, do look into it.

11th September 2023
To all who mourn those killed or injured in the dreadful events of twenty-two years ago, my deepest sympathies. We will remember them.

Memories, of whatever kind, can make a wonderful theme for stories, whether these are thoughtful pieces or more humorous ones. Think about why your character remembers what they do (or who of course). Why are they recalling this (or them) now? Is it something they have learned to come to terms with, as best as anyone can? Are their memories reliable? What do other characters in the story think?

Memories are something any reader can identify with – we all have our own so will identify with a character recalling theirs. Great empathy can come from stories like this. The world needs much more empathy. Maybe in a way story writers can play their part here.

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Cooler today. Have had some rain so the air is a little fresher. Lady and I are not sorry about that.
I’ll be looking at Getting Lines Right for Chandler’s Ford Today next Friday. I will take a close look at opening lines especially. Looking forward to sharing that. Will be running a workshop next Saturday morning too. All good fun!

Many thanks for the comments coming in on Heaven Sent, my most recent story on Friday Flash Fiction. See link in case you missed it.

The 100 word story (also known as a drabble) was my introduction to flash fiction many moons ago and it is lovely returning to writing them regularly for Friday Flash Fiction. Am so enjoying doing this. Screenshot 2023-09-08 at 10-04-53 Heaven Sent by Allison Symes

Another hot day here. This was on 9th September. Weather changed the next day! We’re all staying as cool as possible. Lady got to see her best friend, the Rhodesian Ridgeback, when it was cooler. Both dogs happy about that. Friends matter!

Looking forward to sharing a workshop next Saturday morning. The beauty of Zoom? No travel on hot sticky days! One blessing for the Bridge House Publishing celebration event being in December is that hot sticky days will not be an issue!

I know now my story for a literal festival competition didn’t make the cut but I will take another look at this tale at some point and see what else can be done with it before submitting it elsewhere. Sometimes I find I need to make amendments. Sometimes I don’t.

Having been a competition judge, I know how difficult it can be to produce a short list. So take heart if your story doesn’t do anything in a competition. See it as another opportunity to refresh it and re-submit it. A turn down doesn’t necessarily mean there was anything wrong with your story but taking the chance to have a second look at it may well help you see where you could strengthen it here, strengthen it there. That has been my experience.

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My favourite sort of flash fiction is the drabble – the 100-worder – and it has been fantastic getting back to these for Friday Flash Fiction in particular. But I am also very fond of the sub-500 words kind. It is worth practicing writing to this kind of word count as it is a common format for competitions.

Also easy to share (if you wish) on your website, newsletter etc as they don’t up too much space and are quick and easy to read. I save some of mine for this but also put others towards a future collection. Marketing and a first draft for another book in one go here!

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It has been a hectic Monday (though thankfully cooler than last week. Given I’ve been batch cooking today, I appreciated that!). Definitely time for a story then. Hope you enjoy my latest on YouTube – One Day My Spell Will Come.

 

One of the things I look for in an opening line (which is something I’ll talk more about for Chandler’s Ford Today on Friday) is whether it hooks me enough to make me want to read on. It has to provoke the “have got to find out what happens next” moment.

This can be done via something intriguing about the character, setting up a dilemma which has to be resolved, or even setting a question the story would have to answer by the end. In Being Yourself from Tripping the Flash Fantastic, I start with Jane Stephens suppressed the urge to scream. I would hope that would make people want to read on to find out why!

I do know if I’m not intrigued by an opening line of mine, others won’t be either. It is a great motivator to come up with something good!

 

Occasionally I write a flash piece which could be termed as horror. For me, the best horror isn’t all guts and gore but implied menace. The reader can then imagine what that menace looks like etc and does a grand job of this. I do it too when I watch a suspense film. Sometimes at least what I imagine is going to happen next is more scary than what does happen in the movie!

In my story Pressing the Flesh in From Light to Dark and Back Again, I imply references to Burke and Hare (bodysnatchers) and my character being inspired by that. Yet I do not use anything gory here. To my character their actions make sense and maybe that is the scariest thing of all. Maybe that is where true horror does lie. Certainly we can learn from our own history here when someone believes themselves to be so right they can do anything so go on to do so. You could argue we are seeing it again.

The point of fiction, including horror, is to entertain, helps us escape our cares for a while, but it can also show us something of our human nature. Horror can be brutally honest here. But it doesn’t need to be guts and gore to make us think about what we as a species can be capable of.

After all there are some horrific moments, when you stop and think about it, in the nursery rhymes and fairytales most of us would have grown up with, which most consider would and should act as warnings.
Would still like to know though why Little Red Riding Hood didn’t spot that wasn’t her granny in the dress and cap. Did she honestly think her granny was that hairy? Maybe LRH should have gone and got her eyesight checked at Specsavers! (Other opticians are available, as they say! Probably best known ones here in the UK though).

Advantage to flash is setting characters anywhere

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Writing and Reading – The Inseparable Joys

I have long felt writers have two joys in life – writing and reading. Most writers are inspired to write because of the books they have loved reading. Ideas for stories have sparked from what we have read and you develop this urge to write your own. Sometimes that urge can come from reading a “duff” book and wanting to do better. Better though is when an inspried story encourages you to write.

My first venture into print was with a reworked fairytale told from the viewpoint of Cinderella’s youngest step-sister. That came out in Alternative Renditions (Bridge House Publishing) in 2009 – my story in there is A Helping Hand.

But without the original faurytale I loved (and still do), I couldn’t have written my tale. We do stand on the shoulders of giants here. We build on what has gone before. And that means we have to read more. Don’t have a problem with that!

What I have found in recent years is that inspiration for stories can come from something I’ve read in non-fiction too. I have welcomed that development as I love reading fiction and non-fiction.

 

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Benefits of Creativity

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Wow! What a hot week in my part of the world. September has gone barmy AND balmy! Some time ago I bought a laptop stand with its own in-built fan to keep the computer cool. It has proved to be a wise purchase. I just wish I came with an in-built fan. Could do with one right now.

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Hope you have had a good day. Another hot one here. Hard to believe it is a year today since we lost Queen Elizabeth, a very much missed lady.

Am pleased to share the Benefits of Creativity, my latest post for Chandler’s Ford Today. I celebrate the joys of creativity in any form and share some of the benefits of any kind of creative activity. I couldn’t share them all but using more of your brain and keeping your brain active are just two major health benefits to being creative.

With many of the creative arts, there can be opportunities to get your work out there to a wider public too. I have made many friends thanks to being interested in creative writing and I treasure them all. Hope you enjoy the post and whatever form of creativity you enjoy. It is good for you!

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I wasn’t sorry I had a swimming session in my diary today. It was lovely in the pool. I was only sorry to have to get out. This was especially nice after an afternoon spent putting wood preservative on a huge fence panel yesterday. Both were good workouts. One was much more fun than the other though!

Time for a rantette (and that should be a proper word): I sometimes get inappropriate comments on my posts. Every writer I know gets them. My specialism seems to be US Generals who all seem to be tragically widowed. Stay well clear, folks. At best this is a phishing exercise. At worse, it is an outright scam designed to trick you, hack your social media accounts etc.

To those who have been putting these things on my timeline, don’t. I delete and block. Where I don’t want to take a post down, I will put out a warning comment to others to advise to stay well clear. You are merely being a pain. I am here as a writer/editor, nothing else.

And those who claim to have tried to friend me in the normal way or don’t want to do that because it seems rude – you are lying. I know you are lying. Go away. You are being rude in putting comments like that on my timeline.

And it would not at all surprise me if I have someone put an inappropriate comment on this post but I thought I would put the word out anyway.

This did happen. I had someone query about the security of my account. Had absolutely nothing to do with this post as I pointed out. I urged them to re-read what I had actually said and pointed out this was a kind of public service announcement against scammers. Do be careful out there, folks. Oh and someone has tried to hack my Facebook account tonight (8th September 2023). Failed because I reported to Facebook I had NOT requested an account change reset. I suspect that someone might have been upset by this post but it is a warning to be vigiliant, always.

I had to deal with a nasty scam case which almost cleared my late father out. All sorted thankfully and Dad was recompensed too. But it has left me with a very loud alarm bell ringing in my head at anything that seems like a scam. I have a zero tolerance threshold for any kind of scam.

Mind you, it was very satisfying when those scammers tired to trick Dad again later. The second time they spoke to me. I was crystal clear in my opinions of them. You can imagine the rest! Dad had no further problems after that. Result!

Every so often I will write stories about scammers. No surprises to hear I always make sure they get their comeuppance. What is fun here is working out how (and I hope readers find that too). But I must admit they are such as joy to write. Well, they do say write what you know, don’t they?

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Hope today has been okay. Another hot one in my part of the world. Managed to get another fence panel painted with wood preservative. Dried within minutes. Fortunately I am under good cover as there are huge trees near by so that was pleasant. Lady stays in – she is sensible with the heat and, more importantly, so are we with her – and I can’t trust her not to try to stick her head in the preservative tin! It is all glamour here – not!

I’ll be talking about the Benefits of Creativity for Chandler’s Ford Today later this week. Link up on Friday.
Will be running another flash fiction workshop on Zoom soon. Looking forward to that.

Writing Tip: Don’t worry about not having as much time as you would like to write. That is true for most of us. And you can still jot down ideas, start a draft in short pockets of time. I do this. Then when I have longer at my desk I have something to work on immediately. I like that. On the busy days, I still feel as if I have written something, which I have. I like that too.

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Am pleased to be back on Friday Flash Fiction with my latest 100-word tale, Heaven Sent. See if my character thinks what the new new vicar has done is heavenly inspired or not! Hope you enjoy the story.

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It is hard to believe that tomorrow (8th September 2023) will be the first anniversary of the late Queen’s passing. She is much missed.

But it led me to think that there are plenty of story ideas to be had/written on the theme of anniversaries. Anniversaries can be happy or sad. They can be something your character wants to remember or not. Maybe an anniversary makes them face up to something and they then take a different path in life. But there are story ideas here.

I used an anniversary of some adult children’s visit to their elderly father in Time for Tea in From Light to Dark and Back Again. Was all as it appeared to be?

Well, naturally I am not revealing that here but I liked the idea of using an anniversary in this way. It doesn’t have to be an “obvious” anniversary either, which gives even more leeway for a story to be created.

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I often use random generators to help me get started on a new piece of flash. What I especially like is when one prompt generated this way gives me two ideas for stories. I just send the resulting tales to different places.

I have found it pays to set parameters for what I generate. I have found limiting myself to say two or three things generated at a time is effective. Stops me feeling swamped too.

It is an odd thing but I have found limits like word count etc encourage creativity rather than stifle it. I guess it is because these things make you focus.

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Fairytales with Bite – The Changing Seasons

In your magical setting, does the changing seasons have an effect on how well your characters can do magic? Is magical power less in the winter, for example, for does the colder time of year (or other way of marking time span) fuel magic? Do your characters on a personal level have times when they know they will do well magically and other times they won’t and this is due to their own biology? What problems could this cause them?

Does your magical setting have changes of season as we know them? Or do they have their own? Or is a question of both? I would have thought there would need to be a planting season and a harvesting season to say the least. Everyone needs to eat. But how would this affect how magic is used? Is it used in the production of food at all? Can climatic seasons override magical seasons?

How do your characters respond to changes in season? How well or otherwise would this affect the outcome of their stories? Could other characters use this against them?

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This World and Others – The Natural World versus the Magical One

Following on from Fairytales With Bite, is your world setting more of a naturally based one or a magical one? What happens when these come into conflict? What is valued the most?

Does the magical element need the natural side to help it exist at all or it is a case the magical side brought the natural one into being in the first place and there is now co-dependency?

Can the natural world overcome the magical one? Earthquakes etc are not great news or anyone. Would magic be able to stop these things? Is your world reliant on magic stopping things like that and could someone exploit this to hold your world to ransom?

Story possibilities there, I think!

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