Deadlines

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Hope you have had a good few days since the last post Lady and I have ducked the rain, got caught by the rain, but the temperature is so much better for said rain. Trees and plants are looking happier too. Writing going well too.

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I’m delighted to share Deadlines on Chandler’s Ford Today. I work to deadlines all the time for CFT, Writers’ Narrative, Authors Electric, More Than Writers, and for various story competitions.

I find deadlines useful but know not every writer sings to that tune so I thought a post sharing tips about how to make these things more manageable (and therefore endurable!) would be useful. I also use some old school ways to help me manage my own deadlines. Find out more in the post.

Hope you find the post handy.

Deadlines

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Hope today has gone well. Some amazingly heavy showers today but Lady and I have managed to duck those, thankfully.

Writing wise, I’ll be sharing Deadlines on Chandler’s Ford Today tomorrow and share some handy tips as to manage these things. Most writers have to face them at some point and many of us all of the time at that! Hope you will find the post useful. See above.

Have booked my train tickets for The Writers’ Summer School, Swanwick today. (You can get good discounts booking a reasonable way in advance and even more of one if you have a railcard. I am now the proud owner of a Senior Railcard and am putting this to good use already!). So looking forward to being back at The Hayes in August.

Character Tip: What drives a character to do something is so important. It is what makes a story believable, I think, even if your character is some fantastic creature from the back of beyond. So understanding motivations, for me, is a key part of character creation and yet another reason why I focus on character over plot. I fervently believe characters set the plot anyway.

Lady and I did get a soaking this morning though that was still easier to cope with than the super high temperatures of last week. There really is a silver lining regarding those clouds!

Looking forward to going to an online ACW group tonight. Plus I plan to get on with various pieces of writing though it will be mainly non-fiction this evening. Having said that it is a joy to write non-fiction as well as fiction as it means I always have something “on the go” and often ideas from non-fiction can spark thoughts for potential stories. It does tend to happen that way around too.

I hope my recent revisit to The Dorset Museum will spark a future Chandler’s Ford Today post. It has already inspired my recent Goodreads one. Ironic as it may sound, getting away from the desk for a while may well trigger ideas to put to good use when you get back to said desk again.

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Hope you have had a good end to the working week. Weather has been a bit of a mixed bag but it didn’t stop Lady and I getting out and about. Writing wise, I hope to look at some stories for potential competitions over the weekend plus I have various blogs to get on with and am getting ready for when Seeing The Other Side comes out. No chance of being bored here but I like that. I have a very low boredom threshold!

Flash is a great format for developing your characterisation skills. Given it has to be led by characters (as there is no room for lots of description), you do have to focus on what matters about the characters you have as the stars of your tales.

What does the reader need to know about them? Why should they care about what happens to them? Both of these questions should be answered for any length of fiction but it is especially crucial for the shorter story forms.

Hope to pick out a story to review for a possible competition at the weekend. It’s often the best time for me to go through my “stock” and it is nice to come across those tales I wrote a while back but which I have not yet placed. It means I have had the necessary time break away to judge them objectively enough.

It is also a fun thing to do to revisit these because you can see what works and from there figure out how to fix what doesn’t. This is the ongoing challenge of story writing. It’s great for the brain!

Flash Fiction Tip: Let’s say you have a character and storyline you like. Why not try writing this up to, say, 100 words, then 300, then 500 and see which works the best? The longer ones will have a bit more depth to them and that may be exactly what you want for a competition you’ve got in mind. Good luck!

Some of my non-fiction posts can come into the realm of flash non-fiction when they come in at 500 words or fewer. I must admit I still tend to think of them as blogs though!

But a thought to try on this front is to pick a topic you like and see if you can write a flash non-fiction piece to it to 500 words exactly. It’s a good challenge and, if nothing else, this can give you interesting material to share on your website.

Thoughts for topics could include ideas which would work just as well for a story theme. For example:-

Justice;

Favourite historical character (whom you can then put in a story or have someone who would have known them put in a story);

Inventions which changed the world (and you can invent some for stories with a fantasy setting).

Best Day Out Ever (and then write a story around a character who has their best ever day out).

There are many more topics, of course, but I like the thought of flash non-fiction feeding into flash fiction like this. It’s useful! I like the idea of having one idea and getting more than one piece from it.

Fairytales With Bite – Magical Stores

Where do your magical characters get their supplies from? I must admit I love the idea of Diagon Alley in J.K. Rowling’s Harry Potter series. The films especially confirmed my thought the place may well look as it it came straight from the times of Dickens! But it also confirmed magical characters need supplies – potion ingredients, wands, other equipment and so on.

So as well as thinking about where they’d go to get these things, flip it and look at who manufactures these things. How did they discover the art? How did they become expert at producing certain things? Is there a “government standard” they have to adhere to and, if not, why not? (Magic is dangerous enough without dodgy equipment!).

How do your “magical storekeepers” protect their premises against those who would steal their wares? What can be done to stop those on the dark side corrupting products so they’re used for things not originally intended?

Story ideas there for sure!

This World and Others – Provisions

How do your magical characters provide for themselves? Is magic allowed to be used for, say, the growing of food, or would that be the equivalent of “artificial farming” which most of us would reject? If they can’t create their own things like this, where would they get food, clothes etc?

If anyone is allowed to produce these things magically do they have the equivalent of a government licence to do so?

For centuries in the UK, the monarch would grant monopolies on various things to those they favoured and those folk would make money from that. For example, Queen Elizabeth Tudor gave monopolies to print and publish music for twenty-one years to Thomas Tallis and William Byrd. That guaranteed them income.

If your setting cannot produce everything it needs, where would it get the “missing items”? Who would it import from and is there anything it could export back?

Provisions have to come from somewhere and there will be people who make things happen here. There could be some great stories here.

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WILDFLOWERS AND SAGGY MIDDLES

Now there’s a combination you don’t often see in the same sentence!

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What are your favourite virtues in characters?

I would list courage, honesty, and reliability. Perhaps not the most exciting of virtues but certainly ones you can depend on.

I’ve always felt Sam Gamgee does not get nearly enough credit for the support he showed Frodo. To my mind, he is as much of a hero in The Lord of the Rings as Frodo is.

I suppose what I love most here is Sam doesn’t pretend to understand what it is all about or the pain and pressure Frodo feels. All Sam knows is he has got to support Frodo and that is what he gets on and does. I love characters (and indeed people) like that. They really are the ones you can depend on in a crisis

For villains, can you list favourite virtues? I think so. I want the villain to be a worthy opponent always (otherwise where is the real challenge for the hero/heroine?). So this means then an ability to plan and anticipate what the hero/heroine might do, their NOT underestimating the hero/heroine, and having a kind of charisma, where you can understand why other characters would support the villain.

Fan still going full tilt in the office. It’s more than what I am!

Writing wise, my plans for this coming week are to try to submit more work. I need to catch up a bit with competition entries etc. It’s not the writing of the stories funnily enough that is the problem here. It’s the selecting of the ones I HAVE written and deciding where to send them, then actually sitting down and getting them out there!

I can get into the state where I am writing loads of new stories but not testing the market with any of them, which is where I’m at again at the moment. So will try and work on that this week I think.

Must admit I hope it cools down a bit soon. I definitely work better overall when it’s not so hot. (The wildflower picture is one taken by me at a local park where part of it it set aside for a miniature meadow. This is literally just a tiny bit of it. The whole thing looks glorious and I hope to share more pics in my CFT post this week. And, yes, I do find getting out and about and enjoying the wonders of nature helps my creativity. It’s just the heat that doesn’t but then if you do feel as if you’re melting, that explains that!).

I love the colour combinations in the wildflower meadow

A close up of the wonderful wildflower meadow in my local park. Image by Allison Symes

Looking up towards the Hilt

Looking up the length of the park from behind the meadow. Image by Allison Symes

This is just a small section of some wonderfully coloured flowers

Another view of the wildflower meadow. Image by Allison Symes

Do you have a saggy middle? Hang on, let’s rephrase that.

Does your STORY have a saggy middle?

It is so easy to focus on coming up with that fantastic opening line. It is even easier, I find, to focus on a great ending, especially if it involves a twist.

But the bit in the middle? Well, unless it fulfils the promise of that opening line, that beginning is wasted. If it doesn’t lead to your great conclusion, then that’s wasted too.

Everything has to follow through from beginning to end, regardless of the length of the story. But let’s hear it for the sometimes neglected middle section. It is absolutely crucial to get that right otherwise the story falls down. (Never a pretty sight that!).

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I’ve occasionally used the title of a flash fiction piece to act effectively as the first line of the story as well.

My Time Waits for No Man is an example of this. The next line reads “But time does slow to a crawl when driving in traffic”. (And boy is that true?!). I must try and use this technique more often. It can be a great way into a story.

I always find, whether writing fiction or my CFT posts, I need a good start and then I’m away. Yes, the polishing and editing comes later but I find once I’ve started the story, I’ve just got to keep going until I’ve got a first draft down.

So whatever techniques help you to get to a cracking start with your writing, keep going! I love the freedom of knowing the editing will come later, the story will improve drastically later, but right now is just the sheer joy of creating and I treasure that.

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Many congratulations to Lynden Wade, who won a copy of From Light to Dark and Back Again as part of Elizabeth Hopkinson’s cyber launch for her Tiny Tales. Am looking forward to posting the book to you.

Many congratulations also to Elizabeth herself for a very enjoyable launch.

I loved my cyber launch (and many thanks to Gill James and Chapeltown Books for that), but I couldn’t believe how tired I felt afterwards! All that adrenaline I guess… or was it the virtual cake, wine. and other goodies?!

I love the way good flash fiction can capture a whole world in so few worlds. What the writer does tell you about a character should leave you being able to work out how that character relates to others, what effect they are likely to have on others, and often what their natural state of being is. Are they nervy? Are they calm etc?

My Time Waits For No Man on Page 40 doesn’t name my character but you know enough from what I have shared to see this is someone who has gone through hell. I haven’t needed to spell out all the details.

It is always the selection of what a reader needs to know to be able to identify with the character (whether it is sympathetically or not) that matters most.

I’ve talked a bit on my author page tonight about the sometimes neglected middle section of a story and I thought I’d continue the theme here.

We all focus on cracking opening lines and brilliant story endings but without the middle of the tale being equally excellent, the whole story falls flat.

I’ve forgotten who gave the advice “try not to write the bits people skip” but it is excellent advice. You want your readers to be so gripped by your story when they come to the middle of it, they will definitely want to see it through to the end. That middle section is where the set up is, regardless of whether the ending is going to be a sad or happy one. And it has got to “follow through”.

I use my middles to feed in those bits of information the reader needs to know so that the ending makes sense. Also I sometimes use the middle to expand a bit on what I’ve set out at the start. In my story, The Haunting, by the time I get to the middle, I have set out three times in three different ways that a particular object is irritating its owner.

So no saggy middles then!

 

TRAVEL NEWS
The joy of the road traffic report
Is knowing, as if playing a sport,
You are not in the horrible queue
So the bad news means nothing to you.
But when it is the other way round
I can bet, from your car, comes the sound
Of a swear word or several dozen
Which irks your kin, except your cousin.

Allison Symes – 17th July 2018

Hope you enjoy. I love this sort of doggerel from time to time!

 

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What do you find most helpful in a book review?

Speaking as a writer and reader, I love to see the following in any review, regardless of its length.

1. A good description of the central idea of the book. (This tends to indicate genre and often age range too).

2. Whether the reviewer liked it or not and good reasons why. (Nobody likes a troll! I want to know what people liked about what I’ve written and what they feel I could do better. I’m not necessarily going to agree but if several are saying the same thing, then it’s time to look again. From the reader viewpoint, I want to see sensible reasons given. “Not to my taste” doesn’t really tell you enough).

3. The review is clearly an honest one. I need to be able to gauge whether someone’s book is likely to appeal to me. Several comments, offering differing views, is a very good help to me to work out, yes this is likely to appeal or conversely that it won’t!

I write reviews myself sometimes and do follow my own advice here. The great thing about being a writer yourself is it kind of makes it easy for you to come up with a good review. You write the kind of review you would love to see on your own book or, if you do really dislike what you’ve just read, to still pick out where you think the book might appeal, while honestly admitting it wasn’t for you. (I love the honesty behind that sort of review).

So happy reading and reviewing!