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Motivation, Characters, and Magazines

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Hope you have had a good weekend. Lady and I are enjoying the glorious weather at the moment. Writing wise, am busy preparing a splendid author interview I look forward to sharing on Chandler’s Ford Today soon. Am beginning to think about The Writers’ Summer School, Swanwick. So looking forward to that in August. And it’s business as usual with the flash tales and the blogging so all well here. Hope your writing is going well too.

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Another glorious day to be out and about in the lovely weather. Lady and I have made the most of that.

How do your characters react to unexpected news (good or bad)? Are they the type which like surprises or loathes them? What do their reactions show you about them? This is all useful stuff to help you portray your characters with more depth.

If I know my character hates surprises because they once got caught out by a nasty one, that attitude will come into the story in some way and will have a direct bearing on its outcome. I’m showing this trait for a reason. Whatever I put into a story there has to be a good reason for its inclusion.

Lady and I busy being out and about enjoying the lovely weather. I have a wonderful doggy flask which makes it easy to carry water with me. Her friends seems to like the flask as well. I am sure it is because it is easy for them to use the “lid” to drink from – will fit any snout!

I can’t remember when I first realised it was the characters which were the most important part of any story for me, whether I read them or write them, but I do know it to be true for me. If I can’t be gripped by the characters, the rest of the story will fall apart for me.

I don’t want splendid descriptions or marvellous dialogue unless they are relevant to the characters in some way. Mind you, knowing this helps me to keep on track for my own writing which is no bad thing.

Another gorgeous day today. Am making the most of it, as is Lady.

Writing Tip: It can be hard to motivate yourself to write anything when feeling tired, unwell or anything like that.

So firstly take it easy. The writing will be there for you again once things are back to normal. Trust the process.

Secondly, if you can do any writing at all, do “little bits and pieces”. It’s what I do especially on those hectic days when I know from the start I won’t get a lot of writing done. I focus on what I can do and am always pleased to have written something, even if it is literally just a few lines. I can build on this later.

Hope you’re having a good start to your weekend. Another lovely day weather wise. Delighted to say my lilac is out – has wonderful flowers and a heavenly scent. It us worth the hay-fever, put it that way!

Writing wise, I’ll be looking at Inspiration Ideas for Chandler’s Ford Today next week. After that I’ll be sharing a great author interview.

Did get my competition story off this week, well ahead of the deadline. Will be researching others to have a go at in due course.

I make a point of checking out competition backgrounds to ensure all is as it should be. I also check fees are reasonable compared to the prizes on offer. I don’t enter any competitions which insist I sign away all of my rights either. Saves a lot of grief later!

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I am fond of writing what I call fairytales with bite which are tales set in a magical world, and where there is usually a twist in the tale. I often use irony in these too so they’re not aimed at the younger end of the market.

I would say these stories are aimed at young adult upwards and for anyone who appreciates the quirky. Often these tales work best when kept short so it is a good match for flash fiction writing. I like this, as you can imagine.

The mood of these can range from lighthearted to dark and that thought inspired the title for my first collection with Chapeltown Books, From Light to Dark and Back Again. Gives a good idea of what to expect!

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It’s Monday. It’s gorgeous and sunny where I am but it is still Monday and time for a tale. Hope you like my latest on YouTube – The List.

Shirabelle’s life is full of lists but this week has good news and bad news. The good news is there is only one item on it. The bad news is should Shirabelle go ahead and do this task? Find out what that is here.

 

One nice thing about flash fiction is it is useful for those times when you would like to write more but don’t have the time to do more or other circumstances are getting in your way. That happens to us all. Even fifty words gives you a story (and you can write less than that in flash to have a complete tale).

Hope to research more flash competitions soon. I have been entering more short story ones so far.
Most popular categories I’ve come across are the 100, 300, and 500 words kinds. Worth practicing these then!

Often with these things you can enter two flash pieces for one fee, especially at the lower word count ranges. I do take advantage of this. May as well!

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I will admit to being biased here but I do see a good quality magazine as being every bit of a good read as a collection, novella, or a novel. The fact I write and copy edit for one (Writers’ Narrative) is the reason for the bias!

I love good magazines because they’re a great, portable read. The very best ones encourage further (book) reading too.

They can also be a fabulous introduction to a topic (and there will always be books on that topic. What reader wouldn’t welcome that? The magazine is a relatively cheap way of working out whether the topic is for you or not but if it is think of all the books you can go on to enjoy).

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Building On What Has Gone Before

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Hope you have had a good week. Have been enjoying the special music being played on Classic FM this week to mark the 80th anniversary of VE Day. Music, like stories, resonates, speaks to the soul, and can conjure up memories.

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Hope you have had a good day. Lady got to see her Hungarian Vizler pal and play with Coco, the lovely and lively Labradoodle, a fantastic way to end her “working week”! Good time had by all.

Pleased to share Building On What Has Gone Before for Chandler’s Ford Today this week. I look at literally building on what has gone before (and how that may have inspired fiction), as well as taking a look at how writers build on the past, in terms of stories which we love and the authors from the past who have inspired us. I also discuss knowing how to build on what has gone before.

Hope you enjoy the post.

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8th May – VE Day
It was good to join in with the two minute silence at midday today to commemorate the 80th anniversary of VE Day. Classic FM then came back on air with Nimrod from the Enigma Variations (Elgar) and then the always moving Abide with Me (beautifully sung too). I am only two generations away from those who fought in the war in various ways (my grandfathers) and one away from those needing to be evacuated (my parents).

Writing wise, I will be sharing Building On What Has Gone Before on Chandler’s Ford Today tomorrow. See above. I will look at how we all do this in various ways and how specifically writers need to do it. I thought of this topic a while ago – the timing with VE week I think has a peculiar aptness to it, which was something I had not planned. These things happen sometimes in writing. Always nice when it does. Serendipity I think (and that is one of my favourite words too – sounds lovely for something which usually is a lovely thing).

Looking forward to sharing a fabulous author interview on CFT later in May. More details nearer the time. Next month too I hope to get along to an open evening The Chameleons are holding to celebrate their 60th anniversary this year. It is a good chance for them to show what they do and to demonstrate how they need volunteers not just for on the stage but behind it too.

 

Hope you have had a good day. Lady got to see her Hungarian Vizler pal today and had a lovely time. Lady is always buoyed up when she sees any of her pals. Mind you, so am I!

Don’t forget the May issue of Writers’ Narrative is now out. Its theme is world building, which can be done for the shorter fiction forms like flash fiction. My article is about that very thing! Do check it out.

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Hope to be back on Friday Flash Fiction soon but what I have loved about it is how it has helped me rediscover my love of the classic drabble form of flash fiction (aka the 100 word story). It was the drabble which was my introduction to flash fiction at all when CafeLit issued a 100 word challenge. I am so glad I took the baton up there!

It has led to two books being published by Chapeltown Books, with a third accepted, my writing for Friday Flash Fiction, being able to enter more competitions because I write flash, running flash workshops (including for the Association of Christian Writers) and so much more besides.

As with all flash fiction I write, I sort out who my character will be first, what their story is, and get the first draft down. I worry about the word count later. I start on that by removing my wasted words first and then look at whether I can improve the way I’ve expressed things. The answer to that one is almost always yes, by the way!

8th May – VE Day

Hope the day has been a good one. Has been lovely listening to stories from veterans and their families on the radio today re VE Day. Stories are made up of moments, the important ones.

For flash fiction writers, our challenge is to focus on one vital moment. For the longer flashes (say 750 to 100 words) you might have room for two. But given the story will be showing why these things matter to your characters, you don’t want to dilute the impact these things have on them.

Always nice to meet a keen reader. Did so today and sold copies of my books – nothing to dislike there!

Flash Fiction Tip: Think about how you can get your characters to show the theme in action. If I’m writing about dishonesty, say, I will show my character being dishonest. It gets the point across well and doesn’t use up much of your precious word count.

Plus “seeing” the character doing something or “listening” to what they are saying is by far the best way of getting something across. I want to see characters being dishonest, say, rather than being told they are.

Fairytales with Bite – History in the Magical World

What history is there in your magical setting? Would your characters see our fairytales as history or do they have unrelated history and what would this be? I would expect there to have been some magical battles.

Our own history shows there are always clashes between powers and even more so when someone tries to expand what powers they have. (I don’t believe it is a coincidence so many of our greatest fantasy works mirror the kinds of wars we have had over the centuries. Sadly, we have too much source material to draw on). How did these occur and what was the outcome? What could the outcome have been?

As I write this, we’re thinking about VE Day, the 80th anniversary, and there are a number of special events going on around the country at local and national levels.

Would your magical setting commemorate any of its history or do they try to ignore it?

Has your setting learned the lessons for its historical past or does it keep on repeating the same old mistakes? (This does sound familiar territory, does it not?!).

This World and Others – Archive Keeping

Archive keeping is so important. So much history would be lost without it. How does your setting manage its archives? Are these open to the public to inspect? Who handles the archives and in what forms are they? Written, audio, film etc or a combination?

How would your characters go about getting a job in archive keeping? Or are these jobs kept only for the select few the powers that be can rely on to keep certain things quiet?

Would archives in a magical setting “prove” our fairytales to be true? Might not want other beings, such as pesky humans, finding that out.

Could any of your characters use what they find in the archives to change the course of their story, their setting’s history even? If they find something out with potentially damaging consequences to the powers that be, what would they do about it?


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Consistency and When Is A Story Truly Finished?

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Hope you have had a good weekend. It was a Bank Holiday in the UK. Also commemorating the 80th anniversary of VE Day this week. Lots of fascinating and brave stories will come to light this week and it is good we remember. Stories are wonderful things for helping with remembrance.

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Hope you have had a good day. Lady had a lovely time playing with her two best doggy pals again (and should hopefully get to do the same again tomorrow).

Looking forward to sharing Building On What Has Gone Before for Chandler’s Ford Today on Friday. All writers do this. We need to do it too. More in the post later this week.

Consistency plays a huge part in my writing routine. I focus on certain aspects such as my author newsletter, regularly updating my blog, having time set aside for flash fiction writing and so on. I find it works. I work out my writing tasks over the course of a week and find I cover what I want to do most of the time doing this.

Sure, life gets in the way sometimes, but I just pick things up from where I’ve left off and that’s okay. It’s taken some time for me to be able to reassure myself it is okay but I’ve got there! Learning not to beat yourself up over what you can’t get done because… well, it takes time.

What is, for me, even more important is ensuring I enjoy what I do writing wise. That matters. It is what helps keep me going when life does get in the way because I have it to look forward to again and that cheers me up a lot.

Hope you have had a good start to your week. It’s a Bank Holiday here in the UK and I was pleased I did get to see the flypast over Buckingham Palace to mark the 80th anniversary of VE Day. Nice to see some of the talks with veterans too.

Lady had a fabulous time at the park with her Rhodesian Ridgeback and Hungarian Vizler pals so her week has begun well. Nice to see the first rhododendrons out too.

Didn’t get to sort out my competition entry as hoped but I hope to do that this week. Having said that, I did have a good weekend writing wise with plenty of other work I needed to get done finished. It’s another reason I give myself plenty of time ahead of any competition deadline. Things like this happen. I’ve got used to that idea and it no longer throws me the way it would once have done.

Hope the weekend has gone well. Enjoyed catching up with some of my fellow Swanwickers on Zoom last night. 

Friday Flash Fiction are having a brief break from taking story submissions but will be reopen again soon. See screenshot.

Question for the Day: When is a story truly finished? It isn’t necessarily when you write those magical words The End. For me, that is the end of Stage 1, getting that draft down. But there does come a point when, having edited as well as possible, you do have to let your story go and get it out there. So for me a story is finished when I have submitted it and it has been accepted.

When it isn’t, I have another look at it, make any improvements I can now see thanks to the break from it, and then have another go at finding a more suitable home for it. Sometimes I can’t see any obvious improvements to make so again try to find a more suitable home.

Sometimes stories are turned down because the editor has recently accepted something on a similar line. It isn’t necessarily the case there was something wrong with your submission.

But I do see the end of my story is when I have placed it somewhere. To me that is happy ending!

Hope you have had a good start to your weekend. Have started wood treating a fence – I know, I know. The glamour of it all!

Writing wise, I’ll be looking at Building On What Has Gone Before for Chandler’s Ford Today. Link up next Friday. This topic is something which is true for most people/most industries and writers aren’t exempt. Looking forward to sharing more of this, and why building on what has gone before is a good thing, next week.

Writing Tip: Mix up how and where you get your title ideas from. It will keep things fresher and interesting for you. Also it is a good idea to have more than one way of generating these in any case. I like to have a Plan B, a Plan C etc etc!

I use phrases, proverbs (and sometimes subvert these), as well as using part of my character’s dialogue or their thoughts for a title which I hope acts as a hook to get the reader to find out what the story is about.

I always ask myself would this title interest me if I came across it if it was written by someone else. It’s a good thought to have in mind, I find. Always think of the reader.

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Flash fiction is wonderful for capturing those moments which are lovely to write and read but shouldn’t be stretched out or padded to make a standard length short story. Padding never works and I think most readers can easily spot it.

I also like flash for thoughtful slice of life stories which I feel work best when kept short and to the point. Flash helps a lot there with its word count limit!

It’s Monday. Okay, it is a lovely sunny one (mainly) and it’s a Bank Holiday in the UK but it is still Monday. Time for a story then.

Hope you like my latest on YouTube – Acting the Part. Members of the Association of Christian Writers Flash Fiction Group who were at the most recent meeting may well recognise the opening line here! Hope you enjoy the story.

You work so hard at your job. You know standards are slipping. You think of something which will improve things. How does it go? Find out for this Dark Lord here.

 

Flash fiction has many advantages, including its ability to be a useful warm up writing exercise for those writing longer works. Best of all there is nothing to stop you revising those draft flash pieces and submitting them as well at a convenient time. You have a market for these things now.

Marketing Thought: You’ve written a long piece of work (novella/novel). How about writing some flash pieces to use as advertising for the book itself? For fans, these could be added material to run with your novella/novel. It will be a bonus for them and a way in to the longer work for others.

As ever am looking forward to flash fiction Sunday tomorrow. I hope to get a flash piece out for a competition then too.

Have sent in today a six worder for a fun flash competition linked to The Writers’ Summer School, Swanwick. Great fun to do. Never let anyone tell you the short form is easier than the longer forms of writing. It isn’t necessarily so!

But do bear in mind the six word form makes a great writing exercise. Why not try it sometime? You could also develop the stories further later if you wanted to do that.

Goodreads Author Blog – Short Novels

Most of the novels I read come in at around the 80-90,000 words mark. There are exceptions. The Lord of the Rings is a mammoth of a book but so wonderful.

But I do read under this standard word count. A lot of the anthologies I read/have work in can be under this count but there is a novel too, which stands out for me, and it is always a joy to re-read.

This book has had a huge impact on me (and many others). It comes in at under 60,000 words. It is the magnificent The Daughter of Time by Josephine Tey, which made me think again about Richard III. It remains the only fictional work to make me change my mind about a known historical figure.

It is a story about Inspector Alan Grant, confined to a hospital bed, who looks into whether there is a case for Richard III being guilty of the murder of the Princes in the Tower. It is thought provoking to say the least.

What is lovely about this novel is it does what it has to, so to speak, without a word wasted. There is no padding. I can learn from that as a writer. And it does prove short novels can work as well as the much longer ones. Highly recommend checking this one out.

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Once Upon A Time

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Hope you have had a lovely weekend. Busy but fun one here and so delighted to hear I’ll be in print again later this year, details below. Lady having a lovely time catching up with her pals and enjoying the lovely weather.

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Am pleased to be back on More than Writers, the blog spot for the Association of Christian Writers. This time my post is called Once Upon A Time.

I discuss how these famous opening words to classic fairytales can inspire us with our own opening lines. For one thing, they show you don’t need too many words to set a scene, genre, and time scale!

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Hope you have a good start to the week. Lovely weather here. Lady got to see her Hungarian Vizler and Rhodesian Ridgeback pals today so all is well in her world.

Looking forward to sharing my review of Sudden Death at Thornbury Manor which I went to see performed by The Chameleon Theatre Group last week. The review will be on Chandler’s Ford Today on Friday. It’s the first time I’ve been to an interactive murder mystery play.

Writing Tip: How easy or otherwise do you find getting into your character’s head so you know where they are coming from here? I find I must be able to do so to understand their motivations properly and be able to write their story up. A few pertinent questions can help here. A good one to always ask is what do you want and why? That alone can give you a good “backbone” for a story.

Publication News
Am thrilled to say my story, The Family Legend, will be in the Magi themed Bridge House Publishing anthology due out later this year. Huge congratulations to all of the other writers who will also be in this book. I share the full list below and it is good to see some familiar names here!

Jane Spirit – A Royal Dilemma
Diana Powell – Adoration
Adam Mizler – Caspar’s Story
Joyce Frohn – Epiphany
Sally Angell – Follow Your Own Star
Michael Rogers – In the Departure Lounge
Margaret Bulleyment – Island Views
Sara Winslow – Lavender
Sara Page – Nativity
Paula Readman – Quizmas Rivalry
Richard Balou – Return of the Magi
Steve Wade – Seosamh, Meryem, the Busker and the Boy
Sharon Keely – Star Over Dartmoor
John Walker – The Census
Allison Symes – The Family Legend
Ian Inglis – The Four Wise Men
Anne Meale – The Gift of Common Ground
Rob Whaley – The Lost Magus of Michigan
Caliman Florentina – The Mysterious Journey of a Soul
Henry Lewi – The Road Trip
Yrev Very – The Second Coming
Liz Cox – They Came from the East Riding on Camels
Sarah Swatridge – Three Wise…Monkeys?
Penny Dale – Travelodge Epiphany

Will share further news such as publication date when I have it. It will be good to be in print again!

Am posting early as busy but enjoyable weekend this time. Hope the weekend is going well for you. Weather forecast for next week looks almost summery which will be nice. Touching to see such a wonderful turnout in Rome for Pope Francis’s funeral. TV figures etc will be even higher of course. He will be much missed.

Looking forward to reviewing Sudden Death at Thornbury Manor, recently staged by the fabulous The Chameleon Theatre Group, for Chandler’s Ford Today next week. First time I’ve been to an interactive murder mystery play. It was fun but more on that in my post next week.

Character Tip: What kind of language (and not just swearing!) is your character going to come up with and why? Are there words they always use or words which would never pass their lips?

Give some thought as to why this is and you will find out more about your character, which I’m sure you will find a good use for in fleshing them out more. It is a case the writer always needs to know more about the character than the reader does.

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Am enjoying the sunshine, as is Lady, who got to play with Coco the lovely Labradoodle this morning before it warmed up this afternoon.

Many thanks for the congratulations over my publication news shared the other day. Much appreciated.

Looking forward to the Association of Christian Writers Flash Fiction Group tomorrow evening. Always good fun.

Flash Fiction Tip: I’ve found it useful to focus on my character and their situation, get that draft down, tidy it up and then and only then worry about the word count. You do need to get your story “right” and I have ended up with a story over the word count of the competition I had in mind but where I really didn’t want to change anything on it. I feel it would spoil something so I simply save that story for another competition instead.

It’s Monday. Okay, it’s a lovely sunny Monday but it is still Monday and time for a story. Hope you like my latest on YouTube – Pictures.

It is only after her mother’s death Sally discovers why there were never many family photos up at home. Maybe some things were best left hidden after all…

 


Delighted to say one of my longer short stories will be in the Magi themed Bridge House Publishing anthology due out later this year. Meantime will crack on with flash fiction Sunday afternoon!

After the 100 worders, I think my favourite flash category is the 300 words one because that seems to be the word count I write to most often after the good old drabble. It is also a common competition category for flash tales so well practising writing for.

In my collections I have a few stories which are between the 750 and 100 words limit but the majority are either 100 or between 100 and 500. I literally do average out at about 250 or so!

Looking forward to the Association of Christian Writers Flash Fiction Group meeting next week on Zoom. Will be looking at genres. This is just one aspect to flash I love and take advantage of a lot – the fact I can put my characters anywhere and everywhere in stories so I do.

When I have a competition with a set theme I take time to work out what kind of character would be best suited for it. When it’s an open theme, I work out what theme I ‘d like to write about and then figure out the best fit character from there. You do want a good match up here.

Goodreads Author Blog – Family Stories

What do you think about stories based around families? I loved the Little Women series based on the March family from Louisa May Alcott and still have a very soft spot indeed for Jo. I still have the books (bought from a local newsagent back in the days when they would often stock popular titles. Indeed the Little Women series was part of a “Deans Classic” collection).

I also adored Enid Blyton’s Famous Five series (and again still have a very soft spot for George).

But the novel which always “got” to me was Black Beauty by Anna Sewell. I loved the whole idea of a story told by the horse and the Gordon family I thought were lovely. (That idea was explored further in the old Southern TV series which was based on the novel and ran with the basic idea while remaining faithful to the spirit of it, not an easy balance to get right, when it was a popular weekend teatime serial and more stories were wanted once they’d finished with the novel itself!).

I don’t specifically seek out family stories though it is funny how many of my childhood favourites are based on them (another one was Heidi).

Mind you, some of the classic fairytales show families which are far from ideal – check out Snow White and Cinderella to name but two!

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Honest and Dishonest Characters

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Hope you have had a good week. Lady has had a fabulous time with her closest friends. I’ve had a lovely trip to the local theatre and good writing news which I hope to share before too long.

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Delighted to share Honest and Dishonest Characters for Chandler’s Ford Today this week. Fun piece to write especially given literature is full of excellent examples of both types of creation. I look at some of the aspects you need to consider when creating these and share thoughts and tips. Hope you find it useful.

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Am off to see The Chameleon Theatre Group perform Sudden Death at Thornbury Manor later this evening. Will review it for Chandler’s Ford Today in due course. The audience get to interrogate the cast as part of the performance which should be good fun. Have not been to an “interactive” murder mystery play before. Looking forward to reporting back later.

I see going to plays like this as another way of taking in stories. It’s not a bad idea to try to visualise your own stories as if someone was acting them out.

It can be a good aid to ensuring your dialogue sounds right, helps you cut down description (for a play you would see this as a visual set – can your readers picture your scenes easily enough?), and will show you whether all of your characters are playing a vital role in the story or not. If one or more doesn’t seem to have “much to do”, do you really need them in the tale?

Hope you have had a good Wednesday. Lady had a fabulous time in the park with her Hungarian Vizler and Rhodesian Ridgeback pals. Came home tired but happy.

Don’t forget my next Chandler’s Ford Today post is upon Friday when I’ll be looking at Honest and Dishonest Characters. Fun piece to write which I hope you will find useful and thoughtful. See above.

Marketing Tip: Consistency matters. I find it useful to focus on those social media outlets and marketing tasks I know I can keep going. So select what you would enjoy most and stick with that.

I like preparing an author newsletter and my YouTube videos, for example, so I have no problems being consistent with producing these. As much as possible, your marketing as well as your writing should be fun for you too. (Or as much fun as possible most of the time anyway!).

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Pleased to be back on Friday Flash Fiction with my latest tale, Same Old Thing.

Hope you enjoy it. Good to finish the working week with an enjoyable tale I think. Do check out the rest of what is on FFF – you will have plenty of good reading here.

24th April
Hope today has gone well. Am off to see my excellent local theatre company perform an interactive murder mystery. Should be fun. Led me to think though all of our stories should be interactive in that they should engage your readers so they are gripped by the situation and world you are showing them. No pressure then!

I do believe we are our own first readers though and if I’m not gripped by my characters, I can’t honestly expect anyone else to be.

Have come across another flash competition I may have a go at which specifies a character count rather than a word one (and yes it is linked to X or Twitter as I still prefer to think of it as).

Today, 23rd April, is both the birthday and anniversary of death day for William Shakespeare. Not sure what he would have thought of flash fiction given the length of his plays! But in the wonderful writing world, there is room for all word counts and styles (which is yet another reason to love being part of the overall writing community).

Writing Thought: Why not take one of Shakespeare’s famous quotes and use it as a theme for one of your own stories, flash or otherwise? What could you make of “a rose by any other name would smell as sweet” as a theme, for example? Shakespeare was right on that one but could you come up with a tale which proved otherwise?


Fairytales with Bite – Crime in the Magical World

I love the Vimes novels within the late Sir Terry Pratchett’s magnificent Discworld series. The entire canon is superb but the Vimes books stand out for me and books like Men at Arms are excellent detective stories in their own right (and the fantasy setting makes them stand out more).

So thinking about your own magical/fantasy setting, which crimes could happen with in it? Are the crimes solved by magic or with good old fashioned police work (the Pratchett approach, which for me makes the books more real).

If you use magic to solve the crimes, bear in mind the criminals would almost certainly have used crime to commit their nefarious deeds so how can more magic overcome that?

You will need to give thought as to what magic can do and not do in your setting. There should be advantages and disadvantages to using it/not using it (as this will give more issues for your characters to think about as they work out what to do and will help increase tensions in your story).

Also think about the crimes which could only be committed in a magical world, what would these be? What is done to try to prevent them? Is there any kind of magical crime prevention agency and/or a detective one? Who could police the use of magic and what powers would they have to enforce this? How did the rules for the use of magic come into being in the first place?

This World and Others – Social Issues in the Magical or Sci-Fi World

Where magic or where science beyond what we know here exists in your setting, which social issues arise from them? Do these things create a have and have not society? If so, how is that handled? Are there any attempts to make things better for the have nots? Are there classes of citizens who are gifted with this kind of magic and/or science and do they share it or hoard it?

Has your magical/scientific setting over time benefited from the developments discovered or created? If so, how? Do these benefits help all? Those with the skills – are they revered or hated? Would others in your setting have good cause to fear them?

If your setting can survey other worlds, such as Earth, are there ideas we have they do not? Would they be prepared to steal them? If so, how would they go about this without drawing attention to the fact there was was an alien invasion going on (might cause panic!) or do they not worry about that? Have they raided other worlds before?

Scientific developments especially can cause two reasons – welcome and rejection. People can fear what they don’t understand so how would your setting’s people overcome this so new developments weren’t misunderstood or misrepresented?

The trouble with misunderstanding or misrepresenting something is the panic and resulting actions from that panic which in turn could cause social issues( rioting, maybe?).

Food for story thought there I hope.

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Character and Story Traits I Love

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Hope you had a lovely Easter weekend. Sorry to hear about the death of Pope Francis.
Writing going well. Weather a bit of a mixed bag at the moment but that’s April in Britain for you! Lady hopes to catch up with more of her friends as the week goes on.

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Hope you have had a good day. Quiet one in the park with Lady but the weather was good and Lady had a great time running around.

Writing wise, don’t forget my next author newsletter will be out on 1st May, the first one from the new service provider. To sign up do head over to my landing page at https://allisonsymescollectedworks.com

The next edition of Writers’ Narrative will be out before too long as well so do keep an eye out for that too.

Also have exciting writing news I cannot share yet but hope to do so soon. Good start to the week basically!

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Mixed bag weather wise today. Nasty but thankfully shortlived storm this afternoon. Lady managed to stay dry this morning and did get to see her Hungarian Vizler pal so all well there.

Looking forward to seeing Sudden Death at Thornbury Manor, the latest show from The Chameleon Theatre Company, with my lovely editor, Janet Williams, later this week. It will be another Chandler’s Ford Today “works outing”. The play is one adapted from the radio and is an interactive murder mystery where the audience can interrogate the cast. Sounds fun and I will review later for CFT.

Talking of CFT, I will have another smashing author interview to share in May but more details on that nearer the time.

Happy Easter to all who celebrate. Lovely church service this morning.

Just to flag up Friday Flash Fiction are wanting submissions sent in from Mondays to Thursdays only. See link for more information.

Planning to submit my competition story next weekend a good way ahead of the deadline. Today has been busier than expected so will be spending today writing flash, editing, writing blogs etc. Lots of “bits and pieces” but I enjoy writing sessions like this. The work mounts up over the course of time too.

Hope the Easter weekend is going well for you so far. Am tuned into the Classic FM Hall of Fame chart (and have been since yesterday) as the new one is unveiled over the long weekend. Am hoping I don’t hear the three I voted for until Bank Holiday Monday! Two of mine made it to the last day of the new chart being unveiled. To quote Meatloaf, “two out of three ain’t bad”!

Writing wise, I’ll be looking at Honest and Dishonest Characters for Chandler’s Ford Today. Link up next Friday. After that I will be reviewing The Chameleon Theatre Group’s latest production, Sudden Death at Thornbury Manor, which I’m off to see next week. Ties in nicely with next week’s CFT post given the show is bound to have plenty of both type of characters here!

Writing Tip: Much as I love the outline, do give yourself manoeuvre room. What I mean by that is I don’t plan out every little thing about my characters or my storyline. I just need enough to get started and to have a rough ending in mind. It gives me space to work out how ideas which occur to me as I write my draft (and it happens a lot) will fit in or are better than my original thoughts and I can adjust accordingly.

I usually find if I know enough about my characters an apt story for them will occur from their outline anyway and it is why most of the time I focus on knowing my characters first. The one exception to that is if I am entering a competition with a set theme where the situation has been given to you. I then work out the kind of character which would best suit that situation.

But whether I work with the situation first or with the characters, I always give myself that manoeuvre room as better ideas occur to me. It is one of the laws of writing other better ideas will occur to you as you write your drafts but you need to have written something to generate those or so I have found. But if you have got that manoeuvre room available it is easier to put those better ideas to good use.

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Hope today has gone well for you. Submitted a flash piece yesterday. Am building up a bank of 100 word stories as I have different outlets for them and it is good to have something I know I can call on when I spot a competition I like. There are a number of 100 word competitions out there so it is worth keeping an eye on.

Looking forward to the Association of Christian Writers Flash Fiction Group next week too. Will be looking at writing in different genres using flash, which is something I do a lot as flash can give you more freedom than you might think. It is just the word count limit you need to watch.

It’s Monday, albeit a Bank Holiday one in the UK. Time for a story. Hope you like my latest on YouTube – The Waiting Game. I sometimes write historical flash fiction and this is an example of that.

What someone who could be considered to be the power behind the throne really makes of their role. It isn’t all banquets and flashy clothes. Would you do what my character is preparing to do?

 

Plenty of lovely singing at church this morning including the classic tune of Maccabeus from Handel for Thine be The Glory. This wonderful music often turns up in the Classic FM Hall of Fame, which I am enjoying this weekend. Not heard this one so far this year.

Prompt: Story thought for you. What would your characters like to sing if they could pick one tune? Why would they choose this? There will be a story behind their choice. What could you do with that?

Looking forward to flash fiction Sunday afternoon tomorrow. Am hoping to submit a competition entry as part of that.

When it comes to flash competitions and titles, most of the competitions don’t include the title as part of their word count allowance but there are always exceptions to the rules! I always note whether a competition allows for the title in the word count or not, along with what the overall word count is.

Where a competition does include the title as part of the word count permitted, I allow up to five words for the title. I then write to the story up to whatever word count is remaining. If I end up taking a couple of words out of the title, I can add them to the story or not, depending on whether I need a couple of extra words or not. It is always all right to come in at under the word count stated, unless a competition expressly states they want a specific word count.

Basically, it pays to check and double check the rules. Competitions do vary in their requirements and you don’t want your stories discarded due to not following these things.

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One of the things I love about series novels is watching how the characters develop over several books. The best for me for this is the development of Sam Vimes in the much missed Sir Terry Pratchett’s Discworld series. 

The transformation in that character is astounding and so well done. Start with Guards! Guards!, work through Men at Arms (which is also a fabulous detective tale) and wind up with Raising Steam and you will see what I mean.

But thinking about this led me to consider those character traits I love to see in fiction. I love courage, honesty, working hard etc and Sam Vimes easily embodies all of those. He’s also not afraid to upset his “superiors” when he needs to do that. I have a soft spot for characters doing that. It usually is deserved!

What I’ve always loved about the classic fairytales is characters deserving of help get it. Those who are arrogant etc are usually brought down a peg or two. But with rare exceptions they do learn their lesson. Oh if only that would happen in life, yes?

One huge advantage to reading widely (across genres as well as types of fiction such as short stories, flash as well as novellas and novels) is you get to see so many more character developments and I have always loved this as a reader. It means even more to me now I’m a writer as well.

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What You Need to Know About Character Creation and Shorter Fiction Forms

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Hope you have had a good week. Have had some writing admin to tackle again but now sorted. Lady has had a lovely time with her pals. Looking forward to the Easter celebrations and a long weekend. Have a good Easter break yourself, whether you celebrate or not.

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Double Blog Time!

18th April 2025 – Good Friday – Chandler’s Ford Today

Second blog post from me today. First one below! This time it is my latest for Chandler’s Ford Today. This time I look at What You Need to Know About Character Creation. (Combines well with my Authors Electric post too! It does too. See below).

I look at the positives and negatives of using certain traits (which is something you can expand further depending on which trait you use for your characters). I also look at attitudes, situations, and dialogue, so I hope you will find plenty of useful information here.

Do have fun creating your characters. I think it is the best aspect to storytelling.

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18th April 2025 – Good Friday – Authors Electric
Double blog post today. First up is my latest on Authors Electric. This month I discuss Shorter Fiction Forms.  Second blog above.

One huge advantage to the shorter forms of fiction is they do make you focus on what does matter for your characters, you don’t have the word count room to do otherwise. But that in turn is a good discipline to get used to for writing any fiction. Hope you find it useful.

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Hope the day has gone well. Lady got to see her Hungarian Vizler friend again so all is well there.

My Chandler’s Ford Today post on What You Need to Know for Character Creation will be up tomorrow. See top post.

It is double blog day for me tomorrow given my Authors Electric post will also be up. That will be on the topic of Short Fiction Forms. See second post!

Looking forward to sharing both of those tomorrow so expect two posts. Has been lovely and busy on the non-fiction front!

 

Hope you have had a good day. Squally weather this morning, better this afternoon. Lady did get to see and have a fabulous time with her Hungarian Vizler friend and Coco, the lovely Labradoodle.

Writing wise, I will be sharing What You Need to Know For Character Creation on Chandler’s Ford Today on Friday. See top post.

Following my scam warning post yesterday, I have since heard a few other writers I know have had similar experiences so clearly there is a spate of these things going on at the moment.

Newsletter coming along nicely. To sign up for this do head over to my landing page at https://allisonsymescollectedworks.com

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Theme this time will be on playing with genre in flash fiction, which I‘ll be discussing in further depth later this month for the Association of Christian Writers Flash Fiction Group.

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Pleased to be back on Friday Flash Fiction with my latest 100 words tale, Appearances. Trying to keep up appearances doesn’t always work out. Find out why here.

Hope today has been a good one.

I sometimes decide on what my next flash fiction story will be by picking a topic to write about. This is good practice for competitions with a set theme too. I then look at the kind of characters which could serve that topic well and then start to flesh them out.

The topic has got to grip me (and that goes for the set theme for competitions too) for me to want to write to it, of course. Not every topic does.

But there are plenty of topics (and set theme competitions) to go around to this never worries me. I think you do have to have a keen interest in the topic of theme to be able to do it any justice at all.

Hope the day has been a good one. Just to flag up the submissions window for Friday Flash Fiction is now open again. Have sent in something this afternoon.

Flash fiction is a lovely thing to share on your website, social media etc to flag up the kind of writing you do. It’s a good way to share something of interest to your subscribers for your author newsletter. It’s fun to do too especially if you love creating characters, which has always been my favourite aspect to storytelling.

Create my “people” (not that I always choose humans!), put them in a situation and find out what happens! And although I outline so I know roughly what is going to happen, I deliberately don’t plan out everything. I like to give my characters room to surprise me and they often do. I love that too.

Fairytales with Bite – Endings which Could Be Beginnings

I write this in the run up to Easter 2025 and it led me to think that, as a Christian, I see Good Friday as an ending (the crucifixion of Jesus) which became a new beginning (the resurrection of Jesus on Easter Sunday).

But it also led me to think we can have endings which could be beginnings for our stories too in any genre but I’m focusing on one of my favourite kinds – the fairytale. How?

Simply by remembering there are two sides to every story. What is one character’s happy ever after ending will bring about a change of circumstances for other characters in the story (which they may or may not welcome of course) and those can be interesting avenues to explore further.

The musical Wicked is based on an alternative look at The Wizard of Oz story and people seem to like this!

My first story in print, A Helping Hand (in Alternative Renditions, Bridge House Publishing, 2009) looks at the Cinderella story from the viewpoint of the youngest stepsister. That character had a distinct view on Cinders as you can imagine. The story was great fun to write and I was thrilled for it to be my breakthrough in print.

There is nothing to stop you from (a) taking a character of yours and exploring their story further (it is where prequels can come in for one thing) and/or (b) taking another character from your story and doing something creative with them.

Why not give it a go? Having endings which could be beginnings for new stories is great fun to do. I think it works especially well with fairytales.

This World and Others – Upheavals

Our world is always full of upheavals and is especially this way as I write this in April 2025. But it led me to wonder about the kinds of upheavals your settings might see. Do they make ours look pathetic by comparison or are their upheavals “ a piece of cake” compared with what we have going on here?

What triggers your setting’s overall upheaval? Usually these things start with something small which then build and build. What would be your characters’ involvement in this? Are they the trigger point themselves or do they get caught up in the momentum of events as things build up and then find they can’t escape?

What are the consequences of the upheavals? Does it lead to political or other change or does the upheaval fail and governments crack down harder than ever on any kind of dissent? (This does sound depressingly familiar doesn’t it? The one positive is taking this idea and using it for a story where at least you can decide what the ending will be!).

Also, something positive can come out of things like this. For example, communities torn apart by previous events can come together to fight against a common foe (not necessarily literally though that too is a possibility). Things which needed to be changed are changed and for the better for most. The great thing here is you get to decide what these will be.

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Writers and Stationery – A Match Made In Heaven

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Hope you have had a good week., Pleased to announce I will be changing newsletter service provider from 1st May. I have put in the link to the new one where you can subscribe now. This link is on other pages of my website too now. Lady has had a lovely week with her friends int he park – as have I!

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Hope you have had a good day Lady had a lovely time in the sunshine with her Rhodesian Ridgeback pal this morning. Great time had by both dogs.

Delighted to share my latest Chandler’s Ford Today post. This week, I talk about Writers and Stationery – A Match Made In Heaven. I don’t know of any writer who has enough notebooks and pens!

Fun post to write. Just to prove that, here’s the opening line.

With apologies to the late Jane Austen, I will start by saying it is a truth universally acknowledged that writers have two obsessions, okay three if you count chocolate, but what are the other two?

Hope you enjoy a cheerful post written in a cheerful spirit!

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Lady and I made the most of a lovely sunny day again today. Didn’t get to see any of her pals today unfortunately. Lady had to put up with me but she made do well enough!

Will be sharing Writers and Stationery – A Match Made in Heaven on Chandler’s Ford Today this week. Link up tomorrow. See above. Such fun to write. Hope you will enjoy the post too.

Newsletter News: Just to say I am changing my newsletter email service provider. Sadly, my current one is stopping the free plan (as from June), which is more than enough for my needs as things stand at the moment so have found another leading service provider instead. I didn’t want to leave this until the last minute so have made the switch now.

For new subscribers, I do have the link set up so you can sign up both my via website and I will also be sharing the link again on my website/blog round up post tomorrow. I’m also sharing it here. See screenshot below for what the new sign up form looks like.

The first newsletter to go out with the new service provider will be the May one. Any queries, do contact me via my contact form via my website.

Hope you had a good day. Lady got to see her Hungarian Vizler and Rhodesian Ridgeback pals today. Lovely time had by all.

Had a lovely Zoom meeting re editing at lunchtime and am looking forward to another webinar this evening on storytelling. Zoom has made a lot of things possible including learning more about your craft without having to travel anywhere. It means I can take part in more things than I would otherwise have done and I’ve made the most of this, especially over the last couple of weeks or so.

Zoom Tip: I prepare presentations on PowerPoint when I run groups on Zoom but it pays to have a practice run on this ahead of your meeting. I do rehearse short stories and flash (especially for Open Prose Mic Nights) via Zoom but you can do the same with presentations. 

I do find on the run though I will think of other ideas to add in to make the presentation more useful. I think this is because I am putting myself in the audience seat when doing such run throughs and I can spot any gaps or something which would be additionally useful that much more easily.

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No Friday Flash Fiction story from me this week as the submissions window isn’t open again after the Andrew Siderius competition. The window will be reopen again soon and I will flag it up when I know it is.

Writing for FFF has got me back to the joy of writing the 100 word tales, which was my introduction to flash fiction in the first place. Also bear in mind the 100 words limit is a popular competitions one so it is worth practicing writing to this flash category.

You still need a proper beginning , middle and end but it is often at these lower word counts, I work out the ending first and then plan backwards to get to the start. It gives me a structure and I can confirm it works. No danger of running out of word count for the ending because I have already sorted that out. Helps keep me on track for a tight beginning and middle too. No waffle room at all! That is a great thing.


Just to confirm the news I’ve shared over on my author page, I am changing my newsletter email service provider. Link here. First newsletter out on the new provider on 1st May where I will continue to share news, tips, story links, and celebrate all things flash fiction related in particular. Any queries, do contact me via the contact form on my website.

Looking forward to getting on with more flash fiction writing over the weekend. This kind of admin is rarely fun!

Another glorious day. I don’t usually use the weather at all in my stories which is for two reasons.

Firstly, I want to avoid cliche (yes, like the proverbial plague!).

Secondly, I am usually focusing on what my character is saying, thinking, or doing. To me that has always been more interesting.

But there is no reason why you can’t use the weather to reflect or contrast with your character’s moods. You could use the weather conditions to make those moods better or worse (and readers will then want to find out what the outcome will be). Moods will have a direct impact on actions and attitudes – they do for us after all!

Fairytales with Bite – New Starts

How easy would it be for your character to make a new start in their magical setting? Fairy godmothers and their ilk aren’t exactly going to be able to pretend they’re not magical so if someone has had enough, or retires, what happens? Can they hang up the old magic wand and have a new start? Do they find they can’t give magic up altogether or is it a case magic won’t let them go?

For non-magical characters, where do they fit into your society? Are they prized for special skills not available to those who are magical? (You could also look at the reasons they they’re not available There could be some interesting stories here). Are they looked down on? Are they expected to be in certain stations in life? Can anyone break the mould here?

What would a new start mean for your character in terms of how they would break the news to whom they are closest to – or do they just get on with the new start anyway and deal with the consequences later on?

This World and Others – Career Changes

Linking in with Fairytales with Bite, new starts can often led to career changes. Why would your characters want to change careers, how easy or otherwise do they find this, and does it work out for them? Good story possibilities there.

Are certain characters encouraged to change careers and what is the motivation behind that? Could be good – no not! (Someone wanting to get a certain character out of the way for a job they want perhaps?).
Is there such a thing as a Careers Advisory Service in your setting? (There could be humorous possibilities here).

When a career change has happened, how does your character adjust? What inevitable mistakes do they make? How would this impact on the story as a whole?

Good possibilities for serious and humorous stories here, I think. This is where we can write about what we know of the working world but put it in a different magical setting and adjust accordingly. There would be careers in the magical world we wouldn’t have obviously but it could work the other way around. Your setting needs skills only the non-magical have. (Could this be behind alien abduction stories, they need someone do do the cleaning! Just a thought!).

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What Makes A Story Work

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Hope you have had a good week. Continuing to enjoy the lovely weather, as is the dog. My camellia (a pretty pink) is now beginning to come out. Looks great. Writing wise again have been busy on Zoom but also doing plenty of “bits and pieces” around this. Has been a good writing week to date.

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Hope you have had a good day. Gorgeous weather here.

Delighted to share What Makes A Story Work for Chandler’s Ford Today this week. I look at the role of dialogue and description, what you take in from stories you read, understanding the characters, and much more besides. Hope you find the post useful.

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3rd April 2025 – 1st post – META protest

Two posts from me tonight.

First up, a protest against outright theft by META. I am standing with #TheSocietyofAuthors against the theft of authors’ books to train AI #dothewritething.

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3rd April – Second post

Just to say I’ll be sharing What Makes A Story Work on Chandler’s Ford Today tomorrow. See above.

Am looking forward to sharing my next CFT post on 11th April too as it is on a topic every writer will identify with. More details nearer the time.

Have had a good week on Zoom again and an looking forward to another webinar on Storytelling next week. I do think Zoom with its ability to allow people to join in with various writing and other events online has been one of the few positive things to come out of the pandemic. I’d not used it at all prior to that. And it’s thanks to Zoom I’ve rediscovered the joys of PowerPoint, which I use for my Association of Christian Writers Flash Fiction Group meetings.

Writing Tip: Do your characters have catchphrases? These can be useful but I’ve found it best to use them sparingly, especially in short form writing. What you don’t want is for readers to get sick of the things. Even the famous comedy characters didn’t use their best known sayings all of the time.

Hope you had a lovely day. Lady had a fabulous “puppy party” with Her Hungarian Vizler friend and Coco, the lovely Labradoodle, though it was more a case of Lady and Coco doing the running around.

Will be sharing What Makes A Story Work on Chandler’s Ford Today on Friday. See above. You do pick up so much about this topic simply by reading lots of lovely fiction!

Glad to say my author newsletter went out yesterday. Definitely not an April’s Fool!

Writing Tip: I like to build up a “stock” of flash fiction and blog pieces for later use. I find this pays off a lot during those frantic times when I know I haven’t got much writing time. So when I haven’t a particular writing task to do, I will spend some time writing these because I know it will come in useful later.

So if you are “stuck” for something to write, why not try this? Use a writing exercise or a random generator prompt to start you off (it’s amazing how many of those can also be used for non-fiction).

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Am back on Friday Flash Fiction but this time with a story, It Was There, which comes in at just over the 300 words mark. It is my second entry for the Andrew Siderius competition FFF are running. You could have one story on one theme for the 100 words category and then use the other theme (two are always set for this) for the longer word count category which is what I have done. Hope you enjoy the story.

Hope you’ve had a good day. Lady got to see her Hungarian Vizler pal again today. Good time had by both.

This doesn’t just apply to flash fiction, of course, but do ensure you keep to the right word count for competitions you enter. (This may not apply to novel competitions so much though most would be expecting a word count there of 80K to 100K words). What you don’t want is for a good story to not make the cut because of a rule infringement like that.

But I have found it pays to get the story right first and then worry about the word count. Sometimes I’ve had to put a story which is right but cannot make the word count requirement aside and save it for another competition with a higher “allowance”. It happens sometimes. But I usually do get to use that story in another place later on.


Another lovely sunny day. So nice to be out and about with the dog at the moment. She appreciates it too.

Now getting out and about in the fresh air does us good but how could you apply this to a flash fiction story? Could you get your character going out on their normal walk but with something different happening during it? How would they react to this? What would trigger the “something different”?

Equally if your character goes a different way to their normal walking route, why do they choose to do this? Are they trying to avoid something or someone? What do they notice which they might not have done had they stuck to their normal route and how would this impact them? Does it make them change their thoughts about something or someone?

Story ideas there I hope!

Fairytales with Bite – The Natural World in a Magical Setting

When your setting is a magical one, what would the “natural” world look like? Would this be considered to be any form of life which wasn’t magical in some way? Or would it be the natural backdrops against which your stories are set?

What would your magical characters make of the natural world around them? Do they care for it or treat it with contempt (and is there a natural backlash from that attitude)? Would some of your magical characters care for the natural world – I.e. they would be our equivalent of environmentalists, naturalists etc?

Would your younger characters in the equivalent of schools study their natural world or it is of little interest because it isn’t magical in itself?

Now I would say the natural world is magical in itself when you think about how beautiful it is but would your stars of your setting take the same view?

This World and Others – Environments

What kind of environments does your setting have? Are they similar to what we have? If not, how do they differ? What kind of atmosphere does your setting have? Do your characters need oxygen, water etc? If not, what do they require instead and how are these produced? Are these things produced naturally or do they have to be manufactured and if the latter how is that done?

Do your characters live in what we would consider to be a pleasant environment or is that the privilege of a few? Is your setting’s overall environment better or worse than what we have here, especially in terms of things like pollution? Has your setting been better in the past and, if so, what changed?

What would your world consider to be “science”? It is approved of by those who are magical or do they see this as being too like humanity for comfort? Could there be snobbery against science here? How would the working environment be in your setting if this is the case?

Those who are scientists as we understand the term could have a hard time indeed here in terms of being “socially acceptable” and being able to get anything they do accepted by those around them.

Environments don’t have to be comfortable!

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Hope you have had a good weekend. Lovely one here and even more spring flowers emerging. Good to see. Lady enjoying the better weather too. Busy on the writing front but had a productive weekend, which always pleases me.

Facebook – General

Hope you’ve had a good day. Another lovely sunny one here.

Looking forward to going to an Association of Christian Writers Zoom session tonight. The talk sounds interesting.

Won’t be getting much writing done today due to that but I do go to these things, when they’re of interest, when I can. I see all of this as part of what you do when learning your craft, looking to develop further etc. Investment in time for your writing is seldom wasted.

Plus it will be lovely to see ACW friends online again! One of the aspects of the writing life I love is the social side to it – online and in person.

Another lovely day and Lady got to see her Rhodesian Ridgeback and Hungarian Vizler pals today so win-win all around there. How come it is the end of March already?

Author newsletter out again tomorrow. Will be looking at humour as my topic this time.

Writing Tip: You’re tired. It’s been a hectic day. (Mondays always are for me). The thought of writing much seems to fog your already tired brain. So focus instead on writing little bits.

It’s what I use Mondays for with my writing. I add bits to my newsletter, start drafting blogs and flash pieces (but with no pressure to get these things completed that same day). I see this as building up my stock of material I will complete later on.

And the funny thing? I always feel better for having written those little bits. Creativity is good for you, even in small amounts.

Another lovely sunny day with a promising week ahead. Lady and I plan to enjoy as much of that as we can. Will be “zooming” around again this week as I have an online ACW event to attend on Tuesday evening and will be hosting another ACW group on Wednesday which is one I usually go to for a good old chat about all things science fiction and fantasy related.

Will be sharing What Makes a Story Work on Chandler’s Ford Today on Friday.

Author newsletter is out again on Tuesday, of course. If you would like to know more about flash fiction and discover tips and story links do head over to my landing page at https://allisonsymescollectedworks.com

Character Thought: What is the one thing you know your character wouldn’t dream of doing in normal circumstances but you then make them face it? What would their response be? It’s absolutely fine to drop your creations in the mire! I find it great fun but this could, of course, just be me!

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Am delighted to be back on More Than Writers, the blog spot for the Association of Christian Writers, with my latest post – Relatable Characters. I share thoughts on why my favourite Easter stories resonate with me and also share tips on how we can create our own relatable characters. Hope you find the post useful.

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Facebook – From Light to Dark and Back Again

Hope the day has gone well. Nice one here.

Character Tip: In getting to know your character before writing their story up, think about what would be a nice day for them and why. What would be a horrible day and why?

Both of these things have to have a reasonable chance of happening in your story. Think further about how they would handle each type of day and what that reveals about them. There will be insights here you will be able to use in your story. Your characterisation will be deeper and better for it too.

It’s a lovely sunny Monday but it has been hectic for me and it is still Monday when all is said and done. I share Garfield the cartoon cat’s attitude towards disliking Mondays in general. Time for another story from me on YouTube then. Hope you like my latest here – Craving.

What could my character be hiding in her food shopping she really cannot explain, especially since at her age she should know better? Find out here.

Hope you are having a lovely weekend. Happy Mothering Sunday to those who celebrate. Looking forward to flash fiction Sunday as ever. It’s a nice way to wind down after a busy week and I get more stories written – win-win there!

Most of the competitions I send flash pieces into don’t count the title as part of the overall word count you’re allowed. I am always pleased about this! It helps – a lot! 

But a useful tip for those places which do count the word title as part of the overall count is to reserve three to five words for your title. If you end up using less what you have “left over” could be used for the story itself if you need that.

Hope you are having a good weekend. Pleased to be out in the garden for a bit. Mowed the lawn and kicked the football for the dog. It does make quite a sight but it keeps Lady happy and away from the lawnmower. Am sure she sees it as an outdoor vacuum cleaner (which she also still sees as “the enemy”). I had hoped she’d have grown out of that but alas no!

Looking forward to catching up with friends on Zoom later on.

Writing wise, I’m a fair way towards another flash fiction collection in terms of word count. (Don’t yet know when the third one will be out but I have had the nod on it). Have a couple of stories I want to look at tomorrow as part of my flash fiction Sunday as I have competitions in mind for these. Both stories have now had the required “rest time” so I should be able to read them as a reader would. It’s the only way I find works for me which helps me spot the flaws. Then I can do something about said flaws!

Goodreads Author Blog – Beginnings

While true every story has to have a beginning, a middle, and an end, the beginning is what writers tend to focus on because we know readers won’t get to the middle yet alone the end if the beginning doesn’t grip them enough. No pressure then!

Also many of us study classic opening lines (from say Pride and Prejudice, 1984 and many more) to help us learn our craft here.

I know what I look for in a beginning, when I am reading, is to have a sense of setting and who the lead character is likely to be. I love stories which start with dialogue as that is like eavesdropping on an interesting conversation (here I can do this legitimately!). You also get a sense of the two or more characters involved in that conversation.

Basically, there has to be something which engages my interest immediately so have that “must know what happens next” moment.

With my own stories, my beginnings are rarely exactly the same as I first drafted them. When I come back and edit I can see how I can strengthen them so I do. Every word matters. I have to look for maximum impact on a reader. Hopefully that means they go on to have a great beginning with my stories and then discover what else those tales contain.

Every writer in history has had to do this. It is why the classics are the classics. Their beginnings have stood the test of time. It wouldn’t surprise me at all if as you read this, you can think of your own favourite beginnings to stories. I’ve done so in writing this.

Of course, I don’t think you can ever beat the classic fairytale opening of Once Upon A Time. That got me into reading fairytales, fantasy, and reading in general so plenty to like there!

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