Learning From Stories

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Hope you have had a good weekend. Lady and I are out and about, making the most of a mixed bag of weather. I’m looking forward to sharing a fabulous interview with Esther Chilton on Chandler’s Ford Today later this month. More details soon.

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Hope you’ve had a good day. All well here. Enjoyed a lovely historical online meeting last night. It is amazing what you can find out from a topic which is not of direct relevance to your own writing at times.

I do know things I’ve picked up along the way from meetings like this one can sometimes find their way into my stories at a later date. It’ll be interesting to see if this topic does that. Am not saying what it was in case it does!

Writing wise, I’ll be sharing Story Essentials on Chandler’s Ford Today later this week. Mind you, the basic essential of any story for me is it has to grip me and it is usually the characters who do that for me. More on my post on Friday.

Hope your week has got off to a good start. Not bad here. Weather better today too.

Writing wise, I’m glad to share my latest Substack story here – When The Message Finally Gets Through.

Hope you enjoy it. It links to my YouTube story this week too. See further down for that.

 

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Hope all is well. Mixed bag weather wise today. Didn’t stop Lady enjoying herself on her various walks today.

Plan to get on with flash fiction Sunday shortly.

Writing Tip: Don’t forget to review your notebooks every so often. You will come across ideas you’d forgotten about. Now perhaps is the time to have another look at these and see what you can do with them.

One of my tales in my forthcoming Seeing The Other Side started life as a writing exercise set at The Writers’ Summer School, Swanwick. Reviewing it later and polishing it up as needed, well I’m delighted it is now going to be published.

It is worth giving this a go. And you may find the initial idea jotted down in those notebooks may spark further ideas, even if you discard the original one.

Hope your weekend is going well.

Writing wise, I will be sharing Story Essentials for Chandler’s Ford Today next week. I hope this will prove useful.

Am currently re-listening to the fabulous Going Postal by the much missed Terry Pratchett. I love audio books as well as the print variety. Both have their joys.

Audio books are especially great for literally hearing how dialogue and description work. That in turn can help with your own drafts. There is always good pacing to audio books. And I can always learn from that.

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Am catching up with some reading which is always a joy. So many of my flash and other stories have been inspired by tales I’ve loved for years.

The classic one here is Cinderella which was a direct inspiration for my first story in print back in 2009 – A Helping Hand in Bridge House Publishing’s Alternative Renditions anthology.

The fairytales have timeless themes and a great story structure so are always capable of inspiring further fictional thoughts, I find.

It’s Monday and storyline again. Hope you like my latest on YouTube – The New Order of Things.

 

Flash fiction Sunday starts for me in a moment but I was glad to get something sent in for The Bridport Prize earlier this month. The deadline for that, by the way, is the end of May so you’ve still got time to send things in. Naturally I’ve sent something in for the flash fiction category.

Every so often I will review those stories I submitted for various competitions which didn’t go anywhere. I can often polish these up further and either send them elsewhere or save them for a future collection. Often when I review my stories, I can then see why perhaps they didn’t make the cut but this is good too as I can learn from that.

This is the thing with all forms of creative writing. We learn all the time. We seek to improve all the time. No wonder writing can be phenomenally good for you, brain wise.

Plan this weekend is to pick a couple of flash fiction competitions to try soon. Probable deadline date I’d be looking at here would be end of June or July.

I also want to get back to using books of prompts again as I haven’t used these for a while. I do like to mix up where I get prompts from. I usually take any prompt and add something to it but this starting point is incredibly helpful.

Bridge House Publishing have their Big Book of Prompts, which I had the privilege of contributing to, and I have other prompt books too.

The nice thing with prompts is you can reuse them. A prompt on the theme of, say, justice can be used over and over again. It is the characters who change, as they should do in the course of their individual stories.

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I love learning from stories. As a writer, what I learn helps no end with my own writing. That includes learning about how dialogue is laid out, how to tell characters apart via dialogue alone, and much more.

The important thing is does the story work? If it does, I then look at what made it work and why specifically for me. I also learn to look out for the next story from that author. Well, if I loved one of their tales, I’m highly likely to love others by that same writer.

You can also learn from what doesn’t work in stories and apply that to your own writing.

Best of all, you get to do lots of reading!

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Judging a Book by its Cover

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I’m starting a new three-part Chandler’s Ford Today series this week called Judging a Book by its Cover. Hope you enjoy it. A huge thank you to my guest authors for taking part and for supplying their author photos and book cover images.

Tonight’s guests are from the Association of Christian Writers – Fran Hill, Joy Margetts, Ruth Leigh, Wendy H Jones, Maressa Mortimer and I all contribute to this week’s edition.

Images of me reading at Open Prose Mic Nights were taken by Geoff Parkes (Swanwick) and Dawn Kentish Knox (Bridge House Publishing events) and Ana Coelho (Waterloo Arts Festival events).

Hope you have had a good week. Will have publication news from CafeLit next week and am looking forward to sharing that.

And it seems to have finally stopped snowing…. not before time it must be said.

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Delighted to share Part 1 of a brand new series for Chandler’s Ford Today called Judging a Book By Its Cover. Over the next three weeks, I set my guests three questions to answer and they have shared some fabulous information with me. I start the series by having a look at the cover for my own Tripping the Flash Fantastic and then go on to chat to my guests who this week are from the Association of Christian Writers.

I chat to Wendy H Jones, Fran Hill, Maressa Mortimer, Ruth Leigh, and Joy Margetts about what they think their latest book covers “say” to their potential readers. They also share a tip about book covers they have found works for them. I also set a challenge at the end of this post. Anyone who loves reading will be well up for this!

So then – judging a book by its cover – the old proverb says we shouldn’t but for books themselves we absolutely do and rightly so! Covers are a vital element. They are your book’s first advert and have to draw the reader in. So what works for you when you’re choosing your next read? Comments welcome here and over on the CFT post as usual.

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Hope you have had a good Thursday. Had my hair cut yesterday! What a wonderful feeling… and I no longer have a fringe that needed holding back with industrial strength hairspray.

Today I was back in the swimming pool for the first time in well since goodness knows when. For some reason I’m feeling rather tired this evening! But it is great things are slowly returning to normal and I am looking forward to having my second jab in June. That is something I never expected to say! It is an odd world when vaccinations are something you anticipate keenly…

Glad to say Part 1 of my new Chandler’s Ford Today series, Judging a Book by Its Cover, starts tomorrow. Guest authors and I look at some of our covers, analyse what we think they say to potential readers, and share tips on what makes for a good cover. Link up tomorrow and a huge thank you to all taking part in this three-part series. Tomorrow’s guests will be from the Association of Christian Writers. More details tomorrow. See above!


I was chatting over at #Val’sBookBundle earlier about the joy of audio books but what I am greatly encouraged by is that there is a format to suit everyone when it comes to stories. I can think of family members who won’t read a huge book but will watch the film adaptation of it or listen to the audio book of it.

I like to mix up reading “proper” books and ebooks. The Kindle is a great invention. I’m looking forward to taking that with me once again when I hopefully get back to the #SwanwickWriters’SummerSchool in August. I want to save room in my case for the books I’ll buy from the Swanwick Book Room after all!

But what matters is you read, no matter whether you use an e-reader or go for a good old hardback or listen to your stories. It is difficult to overestimate how much reading helps a writer. And you do learn by absorption how books are set out, how dialogue should be and so on, as well as being inspired by the characters you read.

As for my own stories, I try to think about the impact I want my tales to have on a reader and then work out ways of achieving that. As you know, the story for me is all about the characters and they’ve got to interest me to make me want to read on.

So when it comes to editing my own work, I do ask “what is in this for a reader to enjoy?”. It is a valid question.

By putting yourself in your readers’ shoes, you are more likely to write something they will enjoy. You will be thinking about how your character comes across. What is it about them that makes you love or hate them? If you feel that way about them, your readers are likely to do so too.

And it is a useful way, when editing, of ensuring that everything in your story matters to the story and your readers have to know what you are sharing with them. No matter what the length of your story is – 100 to 100,000 words – every word must move the story on and share something important with the reader.

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Putting a collection together is interesting in that several things have to be taken into consideration. I’m looking for the right balance in my stories in terms of mood but also in terms of story length. I have more drabbles (aka 100-word) stories in From Light to Dark and Back Again then I do in Tripping the Flash Fantastic. But in the latter I have more of the longer (500 word+) tales and I have taken my characters that bit further as I’ve written historical flash stories for the first time for this book.

I also like to make sure I have “light relief” stories in my collections so they are not overly dark but I also want some of the darker material to ensure there is a bit of “bite” to my books. I am fond of twist in the tale stories and there are plenty of examples in both of my books but I didn’t want either volume to be dominated by them.

I am also thinking of my audience as I get a book ready for submission. (I aim at YA upwards, anyone who can appreciate irony since that does feature in what I do). I want to give a good mixture of stories so people hopefully feel they have had a a darned good read after finishing the books OR it is the perfect thing for them to dip into. (I love “dipping in” books myself).

But overall I want the books to be a good representation of what flash fiction is and can be. And that’s always a great challenge to rise to!


I don’t always name my characters. Sometimes this is because I feel they will be more scary left unnamed (and this is especially true for my stories where the character is an “it”. You can have a lot of fun wondering just what the “it” is!).

What matters more to me is conveying what those characters are like and why their story matters. For example, in my story The Silence (Tripping the Flash Fantastic) I start by saying “It was the perfect way to shut up Mr Know-it-all.”
You don’t need a name there. What you have got is the attitude of the narrator and the attitude of the unnamed character being referred to as there has to be a reason why our storyteller is referring to him like that. Hopefully that would make you want to read on, if only to find out what the perfect way was and was it as perfect as our narrator is claiming?

Where I do name a character, it can indicate they’re not of this world, or I will pick a name like Mary or Ben and get something extraordinary to occur. Most of us will know people called Mary or Ben. We can conjure up in our own minds what a fictional Mary or Ben might be like – and I can then get to turn the tables on said characters. All great fun!

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Twist endings work well for flash fiction, as do “punchlines”, but everything in the story must lead naturally to that point. This is why for this kind of tale, I write the ending first and then spend some time working out ideas that could have led to that point arising naturally. I then go for the one I like the most as that will be the one which has “grabbed” me and hopefully, later, will “grab” a reader too (in the nicest possible way of course!).

I’ve used spider diagrams for working out different possibilities though a simple flowchart works just as well. (All those years ago when I was working on flowcharts in Maths etc., I never dreamed I would end up one day using them for storytelling but there you go!).

But it does pay to take time out to work out different possibilities. Especially if you are entering a competition, the same ideas will come up time and again but it is your take on them that can make your story stand out and give it more of a chance. Writing down various ideas will help you whittle out and discard the weaker ones.

I’ve also found in jotting down ideas, other ideas come to mind as well. It is almost as if you’re unlocking your imagination here and it will be the ideas that come from that which are most likely to be the strongest ones to go with.

Fairytales With Bite – Magical Hierarchies

There are hierarchies in any created fictional world but I think it is fair to say with magical ones, the sparks could really fly!

So how do you judge who should be the most powerful beings? Who can hold them to account or do they rule over everything and their reign is a tyranny?

If that is the case, there has to be someone or something that can bring deliverance (or at least the hope of it) to the rest of the population, otherwise you have no story. There has to be conflict and resolution.

If you are reading a story where the majority are “subjected”, what we as readers want to find out is whether anything or anyone can free them from that and usher in a better age/better way of governing. (Let’s just say I was relieved Sauron didn’t win in The Lord of the Rings and I refuse to believe that’s a spoiler after all this time).

You could, of course, have two equally powerful magical species and they act as a check on each other but stories here could arise from when those checks go wrong. What happens? Can things be put right so the balance is right again? Who does this and so? Have you got anyone prepared to rebel against their own side if necessary?

Give some thought also as to how those hierarchies develop and what sustains them or breaks them. Conflict, consequences, resolution – the three golden ingredients for any good story.

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This World and Others – Where Magic Fits Into the Non-Magical Elements

Is there anything in your created world where the magical elements are controlled by non-magical ones? If so, how and who is doing the controlling? (That’s always interesting to know!). Can politics be used to control those with powers who, if let loose, could destroy everything?

(One aspect I love about Terry Pratchett’s Discworld series is how the wizards are far more fond of big dinners than magic and the Patrician knows this. Do check out Sourcery in this series for what happened when magic did take over Ankh-Morpork. It’s a great tale and an interesting study in magic not being the be all and end all).

If magic is used as a tool to help your fictional world, how is this done? Is it like engineering, say, when it is used to fix specific problems or develop your society in some way? Is the development to the benefit of all or a mere elite? Can anyone study magic or do you have to be from the right background? How does magic affect the lives of the majority or does it pass them by?

Hope you find some interesting story ideas there.

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